NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Hidden Treasures"30 Days of Poetry
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Comment from Starlit Ink
Every woman can relate to this one. Our favorite handbags can carry a lot of memories, and junk that we seem to hold on to forever. It's so easy to put things in, and a pain to sort through the things that need to go out. I can never understand how men get by with just pockets!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Every woman can relate to this one. Our favorite handbags can carry a lot of memories, and junk that we seem to hold on to forever. It's so easy to put things in, and a pain to sort through the things that need to go out. I can never understand how men get by with just pockets!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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You're funny. Thank you :)
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi,Sunni,
"Hidden Treasures" meets the requirement of the writing prompt by a "love story"about an inanimate object. It is excellent quatrain structure poetry with a rhyme scheme of aabb consistently followed except in stanza 4 where the b's do not rhyme.
Preston
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Hi,Sunni,
"Hidden Treasures" meets the requirement of the writing prompt by a "love story"about an inanimate object. It is excellent quatrain structure poetry with a rhyme scheme of aabb consistently followed except in stanza 4 where the b's do not rhyme.
Preston
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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I used rhymezone... if I come up with something better, I'll make the change. Thank you :0
Comment from 9999pool
Why do women carry big stylish bags and men just a simple wallet to hold money and cards?
They say it is fashion but maybe it's the carrying bag that will cater for all beauty emergencies and impromptu makeover. Large bags for women on the go - it's s miniature suitcase of treasures that will come in handy at the wrong time and place perhaps, smiles.
Entertaining write and well expressed the treasure and trash in the purse!
Cheerio, H&L, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Why do women carry big stylish bags and men just a simple wallet to hold money and cards?
They say it is fashion but maybe it's the carrying bag that will cater for all beauty emergencies and impromptu makeover. Large bags for women on the go - it's s miniature suitcase of treasures that will come in handy at the wrong time and place perhaps, smiles.
Entertaining write and well expressed the treasure and trash in the purse!
Cheerio, H&L, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Such a great invention, but you may be correct. Thank you
Have a good week :)
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Ladies seem to have all these small emergencies so a big bag helps, lol.
Smiles, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment from Dutchie
I love this one, Alicia!!! I always thought it was handy to have a big purse. So no!! You put all kind of things in it, and what you need you never find!!! It's amazing what we save but it brings back wonderful memories, that's for sure!!!
Fia
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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I love this one, Alicia!!! I always thought it was handy to have a big purse. So no!! You put all kind of things in it, and what you need you never find!!! It's amazing what we save but it brings back wonderful memories, that's for sure!!!
Fia
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a good week :)
Comment from country ranch writer
You go girl you will be on your way to the big leagues you keep this up. I wish you a lot of luck in this race to the finish
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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You go girl you will be on your way to the big leagues you keep this up. I wish you a lot of luck in this race to the finish
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you
Have a goodnite :)
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welcome
Comment from L.A.Matthies
This is a very interesting piece, I like your word choices as they add a whimsical feel to a place that can be quite frightening ...the purse! LOL, nice work :)Linda
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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This is a very interesting piece, I like your word choices as they add a whimsical feel to a place that can be quite frightening ...the purse! LOL, nice work :)Linda
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Goodnight :)
