Swans's Invitation
Talent Isn't A One Size Fits All2 total reviews
Comment from judester
Cute haiku, I had a funny image in my mind. There is no such thing se one size fits all...fun for the whole family....and "this won't hurt a bit", cheers Judester
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Cute haiku, I had a funny image in my mind. There is no such thing se one size fits all...fun for the whole family....and "this won't hurt a bit", cheers Judester
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
Comment from adewpearl
Swans's invitation - Swans'
You have counted words instead of counting syllables, therefore you are over the syllable count in lines one and two
good alliteration in friends fly
a great visual and entertaining humor :-) Brooke
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Swans's invitation - Swans'
You have counted words instead of counting syllables, therefore you are over the syllable count in lines one and two
good alliteration in friends fly
a great visual and entertaining humor :-) Brooke
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
