You have a friend
a slightly modified Octogram163 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
I may sound like a broken record but you re really a master of rhymed verses, no one can beat you in this respect. And Sawyer, as always is a happy source of inspiration. I like too, this poem. God bless.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
  |
I may sound like a broken record but you re really a master of rhymed verses, no one can beat you in this respect. And Sawyer, as always is a happy source of inspiration. I like too, this poem. God bless.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
nassus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWHARGIS
I feel like he looks after this week. LOL. This was a great emotional poem that makes everything bad seem less serious with the mention of the support of a friend. Great images to show strife and the fixes of a friend. Great job.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
|
I feel like he looks after this week. LOL. This was a great emotional poem that makes everything bad seem less serious with the mention of the support of a friend. Great images to show strife and the fixes of a friend. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
Gretchen, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Brooke,
Ok, I just want to hug him, and make it all better! What a picture! He looks so sad and forlorn. Somehow he manages to look even cuter than he normally does. LOL
Judging by your poem, you feel the same way. :) This is a sweet write conveying that we always want to make things better for our friends.
Fave line ... "If trees reach out to snatch your kite". :)
Connie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
Brooke,
Ok, I just want to hug him, and make it all better! What a picture! He looks so sad and forlorn. Somehow he manages to look even cuter than he normally does. LOL
Judging by your poem, you feel the same way. :) This is a sweet write conveying that we always want to make things better for our friends.
Fave line ... "If trees reach out to snatch your kite". :)
Connie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
Connie, thanks so much. In reality, he was just very very tired from an afternoon of playing at Nora's and then having to make a long ride home :-) Brooke
-
Hi Brooke,
Amazing, isn't it, how young childrens' faces readily express everything they are feeling? That's what I love about kids. They are so open and honest. :)
Wishing you a wonderful day!
Connie
Comment from ArtGal
Oh Brooke, this was just precious and I enjoyed reading it so much. You have a wonderful way with words, and I really like this poetry form. I am finally able to write again after three years, so couldn't wait to come back to post. I can't be here long, but will return to review and post again when I can. I miss all of you so much, but have noticed that many have left. The new poets have been wonderful, and I'm so pleased that they enjoyed my post. I really didn't know what to expect, lol. When I come back, I'll be sure to read you again. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
 |
Oh Brooke, this was just precious and I enjoyed reading it so much. You have a wonderful way with words, and I really like this poetry form. I am finally able to write again after three years, so couldn't wait to come back to post. I can't be here long, but will return to review and post again when I can. I miss all of you so much, but have noticed that many have left. The new poets have been wonderful, and I'm so pleased that they enjoyed my post. I really didn't know what to expect, lol. When I come back, I'll be sure to read you again. . .Sharon
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
Sharon, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem. Welcome fack to the site :-) Brooke
-
It feels great to be back, just wish they didn't make it so hard to get money to post again. It takes many hours for me to review enough. I always look for your beautiful poetry that I can't wait to read! Wow, I just noticed those stars, so very sweet of you!!!
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
Oh what a friend you would be to this little guy and others. Your concern for his happiness is evident with sincere concern for his well being. One lucky little guy. God Bless Terrie
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
|
Oh what a friend you would be to this little guy and others. Your concern for his happiness is evident with sincere concern for his well being. One lucky little guy. God Bless Terrie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
Terrie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
What a sweet and loving poem. I just spent the day with three of my best friends and know the comfort and joy of having good friends that you can depend on. Great poem for Sawyer and the rest of us as well.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
What a sweet and loving poem. I just spent the day with three of my best friends and know the comfort and joy of having good friends that you can depend on. Great poem for Sawyer and the rest of us as well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
Janet, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from zanya
Hopefully we all have experienced the joy of knowing what it means to have a real friend'nothing I won't try to do /to keep a frown away from you'. Flows freely to the conclusion.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
|
Hopefully we all have experienced the joy of knowing what it means to have a real friend'nothing I won't try to do /to keep a frown away from you'. Flows freely to the conclusion.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
zanya, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from seaglass
A sweet and loving friendship poem is this. Twid be the perfect poem to send a friend who is discouraged. It has Beautiful rhyme and meter and a serious message with a light tone.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
|
A sweet and loving friendship poem is this. Twid be the perfect poem to send a friend who is discouraged. It has Beautiful rhyme and meter and a serious message with a light tone.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
-
seaglass, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from donaldww
I love this friendly little poem. It reminds me of the the Randy Newman song "You've Got a Friend in Me."
I found the shorter lines reiterating the idea of friendship effective.
Excellent!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
I love this friendly little poem. It reminds me of the the Randy Newman song "You've Got a Friend in Me."
I found the shorter lines reiterating the idea of friendship effective.
Excellent!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
Thanks so much, DW :-) Brooke
Comment from Dom G Robles
I love it. I love it. It is cute and very amusing. No matter what, "you are my friend." Well written with the the picture of a kid depicting the friendly theme of the poem. Carefully measured, with eight beats (I suppose) and and 4 beats intermingling, I find it very colorful. Its creative style,
makes me smile. Brooke, my sincere congratulations. I had been in dispose for a while and thank God, I am now back to my feet. I hope you are fine. Dom
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
|
I love it. I love it. It is cute and very amusing. No matter what, "you are my friend." Well written with the the picture of a kid depicting the friendly theme of the poem. Carefully measured, with eight beats (I suppose) and and 4 beats intermingling, I find it very colorful. Its creative style,
makes me smile. Brooke, my sincere congratulations. I had been in dispose for a while and thank God, I am now back to my feet. I hope you are fine. Dom
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
Dom, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem. I am glad you are back on your feet. Sending you smiles :-) Brooke
-
You are very welcome, Brooke. Thanks I am back to my feet again. One favor Brooke. I have just release the other a piece entitled "Twin Peaks. Would kind take a look and provide your comments? Thank you.
