You have a friend
a slightly modified Octogram163 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
A lovely poem spelling out the meaning of true friendship for a very tired little boy there. He'd obviously had a very long and busy day.
Patrick
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Hi Brooke,
A lovely poem spelling out the meaning of true friendship for a very tired little boy there. He'd obviously had a very long and busy day.
Patrick
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Adewpearl...
~~ A touching piece and cute pix, which I assume is your little one... Wonderful way of saying you'll be his ever constant no matter...
Well done...
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Hi Adewpearl...
~~ A touching piece and cute pix, which I assume is your little one... Wonderful way of saying you'll be his ever constant no matter...
Well done...
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Jax, thank you so much :-) He is my grandson - his mom is the photographer :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Carole King's song comes right here.
Reads well and makes sense.
Just touching and sweet.
Life friends that will make it feel like Chirstmas every single day when things go wrong.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Carole King's song comes right here.
Reads well and makes sense.
Just touching and sweet.
Life friends that will make it feel like Chirstmas every single day when things go wrong.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Maddy :-) I appreciate your generous response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke, he looks so cute and tired in net picture. I find your poem to be very creative, illuminative and inventive and I found it also to be inspirational and stimulating for your choice of words are very resourceful. Your rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained and your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this lovely piece of work and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Brooke, he looks so cute and tired in net picture. I find your poem to be very creative, illuminative and inventive and I found it also to be inspirational and stimulating for your choice of words are very resourceful. Your rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained and your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this lovely piece of work and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke.
Comment from Willowsong
This is adorable, picture and all. It was well written. Had a nice flow, easy to follow. Lovely rhyme scheme. I can see this featured on a greeting card :)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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This is adorable, picture and all. It was well written. Had a nice flow, easy to follow. Lovely rhyme scheme. I can see this featured on a greeting card :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Willowsong, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing octogram poem about being there for a friend no matter what. i enjoyed reading it. i love the picture, but he looks so tired.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing octogram poem about being there for a friend no matter what. i enjoyed reading it. i love the picture, but he looks so tired.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) He had had a very long day playing at Nora's house followed by a long drive home :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Dear Brooke, You have a friend is one of the sweetest poems I have ever read. The look on Sawyers face is priceless, and it appears he could use that assurance. Well done, Grandma.. :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Dear Brooke, You have a friend is one of the sweetest poems I have ever read. The look on Sawyers face is priceless, and it appears he could use that assurance. Well done, Grandma.. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) He was one tired boy that late afternoon :-) Brooke
Comment from persevere
What a charming description of friendship.I am grateful for the friends I have that remove the cloud that conceals my moon,replaces my lost-in flight kite and takes my frown away.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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What a charming description of friendship.I am grateful for the friends I have that remove the cloud that conceals my moon,replaces my lost-in flight kite and takes my frown away.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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persevere, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Deborah Marie
Cleverly written about being someone's friend, especially one of Sawyer's. Clever use of wording. Your picture of Sawyer drew me in and made your poem even better, Deb
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Cleverly written about being someone's friend, especially one of Sawyer's. Clever use of wording. Your picture of Sawyer drew me in and made your poem even better, Deb
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Deb, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Deniz22
Adorable, both picture of Sawyer and his Grandma's love poured out in neatly crafted poetry for all the world to see. I hope someday he fully realizes what a friend he really does have in you.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Adorable, both picture of Sawyer and his Grandma's love poured out in neatly crafted poetry for all the world to see. I hope someday he fully realizes what a friend he really does have in you.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Dennis, thank you so much for your generosity :-) Brooke
