You have a friend
a slightly modified Octogram163 total reviews
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
One lucky little man to have such a friend. I had to search to find the modification to this deceptively easy reading Octogram. Kenny
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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One lucky little man to have such a friend. I had to search to find the modification to this deceptively easy reading Octogram. Kenny
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Kenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Petriesan
poor little guy...needs gramma
this:
There's nothing I won't try to do
to keep a frown away from you.
touched me
I always like the softness of your words. They are direct and real and true
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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poor little guy...needs gramma
this:
There's nothing I won't try to do
to keep a frown away from you.
touched me
I always like the softness of your words. They are direct and real and true
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Petriesan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from maggieadams
Awe, yes, the precious childhood blanket. Well rhymed and rhythmic poem and without the picture, the reader could imagine who the friend could be....a grandma? A pet? A sibling? Nice job.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Awe, yes, the precious childhood blanket. Well rhymed and rhythmic poem and without the picture, the reader could imagine who the friend could be....a grandma? A pet? A sibling? Nice job.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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maggie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwisteveh
Another one from the endless portfolio of Sawyer photos...
The pleasing rhythm of the octogram gives this a singing feel, assisted by your excellent rhymes - not easy when you need multiple examples of the same rhyme.
Very nice.
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Another one from the endless portfolio of Sawyer photos...
The pleasing rhythm of the octogram gives this a singing feel, assisted by your excellent rhymes - not easy when you need multiple examples of the same rhyme.
Very nice.
Steve
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Steve, thank you :-) Brooke
Comment from katty kelly
Your poem is amazingly exceptional.The usage of words,accompanied by the melody astounds me.I'd like to be a friend as well.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Your poem is amazingly exceptional.The usage of words,accompanied by the melody astounds me.I'd like to be a friend as well.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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katty kelly, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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my pleasure...
Comment from Aussie
A very nice poem with a cuddle-coming-on photo. I liked the message and I guess grandma would be that constant friend? When times get tough - the tough get going. Well done you lucky Grand mum! XX
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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A very nice poem with a cuddle-coming-on photo. I liked the message and I guess grandma would be that constant friend? When times get tough - the tough get going. Well done you lucky Grand mum! XX
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Hi, Kay. Hope you're having a great weekend :-) Thank you, my friend. And yes, your guess would be spot on! Brooke
Comment from FrannyG
This is absolutely gorgeous and top quality writing as always. Sawyer is such a perfect photographic subject and also a source of inspiration for you, no doubt.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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This is absolutely gorgeous and top quality writing as always. Sawyer is such a perfect photographic subject and also a source of inspiration for you, no doubt.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Franny, thank you so very much :-) Yep, he was born for the camera. I appreciate your generous review. Brooke
Comment from tony bronk
James Taylor, and Carol King: "You've got a Friend when the skies are blue": This poem reminds me so much of those two. Put the melody to this poem, and see what happens. Very nice purely coincidental poem. Tony
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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James Taylor, and Carol King: "You've got a Friend when the skies are blue": This poem reminds me so much of those two. Put the melody to this poem, and see what happens. Very nice purely coincidental poem. Tony
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Tony, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from donaldcolson
Wonderful poem for kids with a message that has universal appeal. It reminds a bit of MR. Rogers of kids TV fame. Its great! My only question is about Ill make them end. It seems to me that the appropriate help would be to restore being in tune. don1
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Wonderful poem for kids with a message that has universal appeal. It reminds a bit of MR. Rogers of kids TV fame. Its great! My only question is about Ill make them end. It seems to me that the appropriate help would be to restore being in tune. don1
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much, Don, for your thoughtful feedback and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from L.M.Mullins
What a face on the tired child And a beautiful poem to match. For me the poem reads easily and I like the rhyme scheme. Good write, thank you
L.M.Mullins
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What a face on the tired child And a beautiful poem to match. For me the poem reads easily and I like the rhyme scheme. Good write, thank you
L.M.Mullins
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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L.M, thanks so much :-) Brooke
