NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lune (Fence of huts)"30 Days of Poetry
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Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
"Lune (fence of huts)" is an excellent lune poem with good figurative language and imagery. It has excellent alliteration. (bring boats, blankets, ...baskets.)aaaaaaa
Preston
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Hi, Sunni,
"Lune (fence of huts)" is an excellent lune poem with good figurative language and imagery. It has excellent alliteration. (bring boats, blankets, ...baskets.)aaaaaaa
Preston
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a lovely weekend
Comment from Dutchie
So nice this Lune. Gives a wonderful impression of Cape Cod.
Must be a wonderful place to stay. Right syllable count and
great picture too. Gosh sounds like a great place to spent my holidays... Well done. Fia
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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So nice this Lune. Gives a wonderful impression of Cape Cod.
Must be a wonderful place to stay. Right syllable count and
great picture too. Gosh sounds like a great place to spent my holidays... Well done. Fia
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from country ranch writer
IS THAT SUPPOSED TO SAY CAPE COD? OR IS THIS A DIFFERENT PLACE? THEY USED TO HAVE THESE CHANGING HOUSE WAY BACK IN THE OLD DAYS.I USED TO FISH DOWN AT THE CAPE WHEN I WAS A KID I LOVED IT SO BACK THEN.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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IS THAT SUPPOSED TO SAY CAPE COD? OR IS THIS A DIFFERENT PLACE? THEY USED TO HAVE THESE CHANGING HOUSE WAY BACK IN THE OLD DAYS.I USED TO FISH DOWN AT THE CAPE WHEN I WAS A KID I LOVED IT SO BACK THEN.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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It's Cod now.... typo. I added a song too. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
You poem(s) conjure up images of wonderful times I have spent at the beach with family and friends, ( not to mention the sunburn ) I like the artwork. Well written and descriptive narrative, I missed your presence on site for a while Alicia, welcome back! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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You poem(s) conjure up images of wonderful times I have spent at the beach with family and friends, ( not to mention the sunburn ) I like the artwork. Well written and descriptive narrative, I missed your presence on site for a while Alicia, welcome back! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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You're kind. I was in Florida with limited Wifi. Hope all is while. Thank you :)
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You where in a great place. As long as its all good! Roy.
Comment from NicciFaye
Sunnilicious! Great poem. Especially for this 30 day writing challenge. I didn't committ but I am writing. You've inspiried me to post my 30 day thoughts on FS. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Sunnilicious! Great poem. Especially for this 30 day writing challenge. I didn't committ but I am writing. You've inspiried me to post my 30 day thoughts on FS. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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You're nice. It's funny how we can write nonstop... then, make a commitment and it's like writing becomes a task. Keep the creativity rolling. Thank you :)
