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Acrostic - a little truth cloaked in anapaestic mumbo-jumbo

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Comment from humpwhistle
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Took the long way around, eh, Steve? No matter, it was
a scenic and entertaining route.
I wish we people were merely tedious pests, but I fear
our legacy will be more lasting.
Because I have no children, I may be more likely
to welcome the fat lady's song.

Okay, we know about the bear, but what about the Pope?

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    Now this would be a story for you - the bear, the Pope and the fat lady meet in the woods. The question is, who gets the fat lady's pizzas, and who the hell is singing if the fat lady's been devoured?

    Steve
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Steve this is very entertaining but isn't the title supposed to be "Is The Pope a Catholic"? No just YES? I was confused until I saw it was in the contest. I thought evil Eddie had been separating your lines. LOL
I did so enjoy the rhyme and the cadence of the poem and the humorous message. Good luck in the contest! Nancy

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    Thanks, Nancy.

    Trust me not to do things the normal way. I don't think it's an actual requirement to have the acrostic word(s) as the title...

    Steve