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S T A R G A Z E R ~acrostic~

Travel the Cosmos through the eyes of the Stargazer...

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Comment from Jackarrie
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I like this acrostic, STARGAZER I am a keen amateur astronomer, we are all part of the universe, and come from stardust. The vastness is mind blowing; the image of the milky way is only one galaxy among billions, a great acrostic for the contest. Good luck. Mary

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
    Thanks, Mary, for your Stellar review. Have a cosmic weekend!
Comment from c_lucas
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The physical body is earth bound, the spirit can soar where ever it wants to go. This is a well written Acrostic poem. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thank you for your review! :)
reply by c_lucas on 05-Apr-2014
    You're welcome.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
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You've captured the many mysteries of astrology in this vivid Acrostic, I loved your graphic descriptions and the artwork was brilliant

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thanks a million! :)
Comment from DALLAS01
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This poem is full of vivid imagery. It takes the reader on a panoramic journey. the art work is an attention grabber.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thank you for your review! :)
reply by DALLAS01 on 05-Apr-2014
    You're welcome.
Comment from 9999pool
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Once in a while we will gaze into the skies and see the heavenly cosmos and bright twinkling stars.
Out of this world and reach, we imagine where we came from.
Trying to count the stars as a child, we became stargazers and somehow never left this habit.
Stargazers as in dreamers find joy that many could not. Smiles.
Good write and well penned.
May the best wins.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thank you for your stellar review. Have a brilliant weekend. :)
Comment from kiwijenny
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Cool acrostic...some have denigrated the form but you have written a marvelous poem...of hope and wonder...I loved it
Well done and the artwork is superb
God bless

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thanks for your review! :)
Comment from honeytree
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What wonderful art work and words written.

The universe is huge and contains many galaxies and stars

Planets maybe life can be on these planets as well.

I really don't think earth is the only planet with life.

We live on earth and born on earth our spirit may live

somewhere else when we die.

Maybe heaven.

honey tree

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thanks for your stellar review. ;)
reply by honeytree on 06-Apr-2014
    Loved what you wrote and had no six.

    honeytree
Comment from seaglass
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This Acrostic describes a women shoe love is astronomy. Each line states a fact about star study from the ancients to now.The picture is amazing. It looks like a giant eye.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thanks for your review. The picture is of a Pinwheel Galaxy...cool, right? :)
Comment from NamastaLee
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Excellent acrostic! I used to gaze at the stars at a child and lament that I had to remain earthbound. I wanted to be an astronaut, then later realized what one had to go through to be one (now I'd never want to be one). I like the internal capitalization - points out the important aspects. Great job!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thanks for the cosmic review! Have a stellar weekend!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Ah-h-h-h-hhhhhhhhh, a beautifully composed acrostic with a powerful poetic message. Dare to dream, strive to reach for the stars. But stay planted, keeping both feet firmly on the ground. Fame and fortune are fleeting. But dreams -- dreams are eternally magical.

Well done, healthfromwithin. A fabulous presentation!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
    Thank you for your stellar review. Have a cosmic weekend!
reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Apr-2014
    You too!