Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

I love sushi! yes I do! Excellent poem..I like how you can take any situation in its positive nature and write about it. Very well done and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014

You're nice. Thank you :)

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Sunni,
"Sushi Bars" is an excellent charm poem with a great deal of good rhyme and excellent figurative language and imagery.(grunts with a voice). It has good flow.
Preston

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014

Thank you :)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Wonderful poem on the 'charms' of sushi! I can't even stand the thought of sushi...and that's so wrong, because I've never tried it, and I love seafood! I will let you try it for me! Blessings to you tonight!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014

There are cooked rolls.... California Roll is like a beginner roll. Thank you. Peace be with you :)

reply by Irish Rain on 04-Apr-2014

Yes, the cooked, I would certainly try...Definitely beginner, ha ha!

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I love sushi ..I love the names for them and the delicious tsar ...wasabi and ginger help keep parasites away from raw fish.....
Well done ............................................
God bless

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014

You're like pro sushi eater. Well, okay. Thank you. Peace be with you :)

reply by kiwijenny on 05-Apr-2014

I'm not sure where tsar came from :o)