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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Dorking Dawkins"
Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
2 total reviews
Comment from
Green Lake Girl
I'm behind in your story, Snod. Catching up. I love the fact they discuss dragging out solving the mystery because they bill on a daily basis. Too funny. (They sound like a couple of American sales reps.) Great line: "I pumped the models whilst you . . ."
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
Thank you. Yes, that's an Oz-ism for sure.
Comment from
Adri7enne
"Mercurial. It means -"
"I know what it means, Oz." LOL! He so reminds me of you, snod.
"or at least missing entities of VARIES species." VARIOUS???
"Something dangerous and catchy." "Like rabies?" LOL! I love the relationship you've established between these characters. "Dorking Dawkins" fits Oz admirably well, I think.
You entertain, me, snod, and I think that's the idea with good fiction. Great fun, my friend.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
Oops, thanks for the spag. Glad you liked it. Funnily enough, virtually everyone that knows me thinks I've based Oz on myself, but that's totally untrue. I'm much more refined and delicate. perhaps the character I'd like to be, but I claim the 5th on that.
reply by Adri7enne on 31-Mar-2014
LOL! "I'm much more refined and delicate." That's exactly what Oz would say! You're such fun, in the most annoying kind of way.
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