Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

And what a glorious photograph to compliment your rhyming quatrains! There is much to be said for presentation that calls the reader to the writing. Already you have All Time Best for this lovely poem - what more can I add? Brilliant, loved it, made me happy, wish winter would hurry up, and best of all...the rains have arrived! Well done Mrs Honeycomb.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thank you so very much, Kay. I always love to hear from you, my thoughtful and generous friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good solid quatrains that utilize the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with bumble/bees...perfumed/pools...seeds/sown. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Righteous Riter, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Brooke, what a wonderful poem. We can make honey (joy)
for others like the bumble bee. Share the joy. You
always do. Great job of rhyming quatrains and message.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Enrique28

Exceptional

If I were a bumble bee...

But since I'm not, I'll do a comparable equivalent...

A lovely image of nature that mirrors a loving aspect of life in a fine verse. Beautifully presented! Enrique

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Enrique, thank you so much for your generosity, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. I wish I were a bubble bee, just so I could fly and thumb my nose at physics. (sorry, I digress)
Another cute poem, these bring a smile and innocence back to ma day. I read these to cleanse my pallet after some of the sad and troubled poems i read on this site.
Thank you for a taste of childful delight.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thanks so very much, padumachitta, for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Another sweet poem from you Brooke - first butterflies now bumble bees. I think spring has really invaded your senses and inspired these well written, enjoyable poems. As usual perfect quatrains. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from comanalbert

Excellent

I think every one of us sometimes wants to be like bumblebees,exploring fields and finding perfumed pools of sugar . I love the poem. It is a very good work.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

comanalbert, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Jumbo J

Exceptional

Hi Brooke,
since bees are one of my favorite things... and you of course are one of my favorite poets, then I'd say I'm in favorite heaven.

Such a deftly composed set of rhyming quatrains... not only did I love it, so did Jade. Sawyer and me eh? Thanks.

With our thoughts we create,
a glimpse of life's true magic,
James xx

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

James, thank you so much for your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

I wish I was a bumblebee...
This one is so full of sweetness, delicious in fact I was wishing I could be a bumblebee too! Bees are my favourite insects in all the world, Giddy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

You are really in your best element when you are writing for Sawyer. I like best the last stanza," But since I'm not a bumble bee, I'll gather in the sweetness wherever seeds of joy are sown in fields of life's completeness". God bless.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

nassus, thank you so much :-) Brooke