Desire Begs My Attention
Triolets28 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
The only thing pastel in this one is the pink font -- everything else is red hot. And it keeps right on burning line after line.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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The only thing pastel in this one is the pink font -- everything else is red hot. And it keeps right on burning line after line.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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LOL Jean I guess that is true you. Thanks so much for a wonderful review.
Comment from Sasha
this is a lovely sensual, romantic and beautifully penned poem. I love the smooth flow, gentle rhyme, and powerful repetition you use in this one. Marvelous work, I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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this is a lovely sensual, romantic and beautifully penned poem. I love the smooth flow, gentle rhyme, and powerful repetition you use in this one. Marvelous work, I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much Smurph for a wonderful review.
Comment from Nosha17
A very passionate poem, with excellent choice of words to express your deepest thoughts. Your rhymes worked well and it had a smooth flow. Most enjoyable, with super illustration. Faye
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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A very passionate poem, with excellent choice of words to express your deepest thoughts. Your rhymes worked well and it had a smooth flow. Most enjoyable, with super illustration. Faye
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much Faye for a beautiful review.
Comment from A Jesterstear
Sixes again! I can review you. I read all your poems but these days I only review a few. I feel anything below a six for any of your poems is an insult. Wow what a poem! 'I'll come for you in streams' Does this mysterious American lover of yours live in a stream? The Triolets are gorgeous, they run like a song. Great stuff. AJ.
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Sixes again! I can review you. I read all your poems but these days I only review a few. I feel anything below a six for any of your poems is an insult. Wow what a poem! 'I'll come for you in streams' Does this mysterious American lover of yours live in a stream? The Triolets are gorgeous, they run like a song. Great stuff. AJ.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Wow!!! I love ya AJ. This is too much. You have made me smile so big. Thank you so very much my friend.
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Anything to make you happy.
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Sigh AJ. Anything?
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But i won't do that!
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LOL too funny.
Comment from lakeport
Desire begs my attention and I love your response, that a beautiful and romantic expressed poem Pami, nice in form,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you,Hugs!lakeport,
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Desire begs my attention and I love your response, that a beautiful and romantic expressed poem Pami, nice in form,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you,Hugs!lakeport,
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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So many thanks Erich for a beautiful review. Sigh.
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your welcome Pami!
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Smile
Comment from c_lucas
A good thing is desired more and more. This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for a very enticing read.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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A good thing is desired more and more. This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for a very enticing read.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much Charlie for this awesome review.
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You're welcome, Gungalo. Charlie
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Ran out of sixers. Virtual "6" instead. Love the way each stanza starts with "Desire begs my attention.." What a powerful and clever way to start each line. God Bless, Deb
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Ran out of sixers. Virtual "6" instead. Love the way each stanza starts with "Desire begs my attention.." What a powerful and clever way to start each line. God Bless, Deb
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thanks Deb for a great review.
Comment from donaldcolson
Your cup runeth over. Another provocative sensual, sexual poem, leaving little to the imagination. I would say that the guy is very lucky indeed. Is this about a relatively new relationship? don
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Your cup runeth over. Another provocative sensual, sexual poem, leaving little to the imagination. I would say that the guy is very lucky indeed. Is this about a relatively new relationship? don
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thanks Don for the great review and no it is not.
