Desire Begs My Attention
Triolets28 total reviews
Comment from Enrique28
Your poetry gets to the core of what it's like to be human, for most of us I dare say. Although there are cold fish out there, I see your meanings as a picture of normality.
Your repeated line is wonderfully significant of all you are so beautifully asserting here...
Can I just say I love it, and leave it at that?
Excellent illustration!!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Your poetry gets to the core of what it's like to be human, for most of us I dare say. Although there are cold fish out there, I see your meanings as a picture of normality.
Your repeated line is wonderfully significant of all you are so beautifully asserting here...
Can I just say I love it, and leave it at that?
Excellent illustration!!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Sure you can Enrique. I love it too.
Comment from Sanku
Your authors notes will silence any doubting Thomas effectively .It is a poem of raw desire, screaming for repeated satiation when every waking dream has only the electric sparks givin out by the lover.Very erotic.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Your authors notes will silence any doubting Thomas effectively .It is a poem of raw desire, screaming for repeated satiation when every waking dream has only the electric sparks givin out by the lover.Very erotic.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Sanku thank you very much for a wonderful review of this one.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi G,
I love this lyrical composition with all the refrain... like again and again... and again... and the images you paint with such colourful thoughts... well, let's just say they make the breath shorten and the heart-rate rise... no pictures needed... the visual imagery is quite enough for someone of my fragile age... smile *~*.
This was a little naughty, a tad steamy... and yes, everything I love to read from you... got me all goosebumped!.
With our thoughts we create,
visual sensations,
James xx
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Hi G,
I love this lyrical composition with all the refrain... like again and again... and again... and the images you paint with such colourful thoughts... well, let's just say they make the breath shorten and the heart-rate rise... no pictures needed... the visual imagery is quite enough for someone of my fragile age... smile *~*.
This was a little naughty, a tad steamy... and yes, everything I love to read from you... got me all goosebumped!.
With our thoughts we create,
visual sensations,
James xx
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much JJ for a wonderful review and your awesome comments.
Comment from Jackarrie
Wow Pam I have to catch my breath after that, the chemical brothers, neurotransmitters are responsible for those butterflies you feel in your stomach. But I think you had more than this one. A well written triolet, I enjoyed it.
Well done, Mary, It had to be six.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Wow Pam I have to catch my breath after that, the chemical brothers, neurotransmitters are responsible for those butterflies you feel in your stomach. But I think you had more than this one. A well written triolet, I enjoyed it.
Well done, Mary, It had to be six.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Mary for a wonderful review. It really grabbed my heart.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great artwork and as always love the repeaters.We can almost hear your sighs in this sensual write, and again (as always) your author's notes always intrigue.Great write,
valda
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Great artwork and as always love the repeaters.We can almost hear your sighs in this sensual write, and again (as always) your author's notes always intrigue.Great write,
valda
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Valda for a wonderful review. SIgh.
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Oh I am sure you can tell... this just begs the question so to speak, because I am sure that when you smile, you turn most men's knees to jelly and it takes all of our will power to remain standing... if poetry was designed and made to sweep you off your feet, make you come up in goose bumps and make your entire body's hair stand on end as if your entire body was attached to a plasma globe... then you have it here. The real feel, the real touch, scintillating and voltaic in horripilation and charged senses... hmmmmmm electric dreams are made of this :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Oh I am sure you can tell... this just begs the question so to speak, because I am sure that when you smile, you turn most men's knees to jelly and it takes all of our will power to remain standing... if poetry was designed and made to sweep you off your feet, make you come up in goose bumps and make your entire body's hair stand on end as if your entire body was attached to a plasma globe... then you have it here. The real feel, the real touch, scintillating and voltaic in horripilation and charged senses... hmmmmmm electric dreams are made of this :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Sigh Dale, what a great review. How do you come up with them guy? Smile.
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Some might say it is the devilishly good poet who inspires the review by invoking images, ideas, sensations, emotions and more with such imbued words and creative minds. there are many types of Genius... to me you are the Genius of the Modern pen my friend. Franza Kafka eat your heart out... coz Pam Jackson is here :)
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Takes a bow. Thank you Dale, so much.
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The world is your stage my friend... your audience, just begs you for an encore :) All credit and thanks to you, for your deft skill, open heart, imagination, creativity and in simple terms... thank you for letting me have the opportunity to read your wonderful writes. I consider myself lucky in that respect :)
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Oh Dale you make me feel so very wanted. Really, you do. Thank you so much.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I find Triolets a bit too repetitive
for my liking, (just my personal
opinion) but nevertheless,
these are beautifully written, Pam.
as always, most impressive.
margaret
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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I find Triolets a bit too repetitive
for my liking, (just my personal
opinion) but nevertheless,
these are beautifully written, Pam.
as always, most impressive.
margaret
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thanks girl for a wonderful review.
Comment from Richard J
Gorgeous, simply enthralling, Pam, and I loved it, as I love all of your poems ... always have and always will.
The Triolet is not an easy form, but your've made it seem as tho you breathed it onto the page, as your pen danced and pirouetted from your fingers with a life of its own.
Sensual and alluring, tender and warm, the power from your bountiful heart and soul never cease to amaze me, M'Dear.
My warmest, most grateful and gracious hug of thanks to you, Pam! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Gorgeous, simply enthralling, Pam, and I loved it, as I love all of your poems ... always have and always will.
The Triolet is not an easy form, but your've made it seem as tho you breathed it onto the page, as your pen danced and pirouetted from your fingers with a life of its own.
Sensual and alluring, tender and warm, the power from your bountiful heart and soul never cease to amaze me, M'Dear.
My warmest, most grateful and gracious hug of thanks to you, Pam! ~ Richard
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Ah thanks so very much Richard. Your reviews always make me feel so good.
Comment from ronnie k
DESIRE BEGS! This allows a poets mind to give a personal appearance within the lines of this romantic daydream, desire is a force to be reckoned with smile.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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DESIRE BEGS! This allows a poets mind to give a personal appearance within the lines of this romantic daydream, desire is a force to be reckoned with smile.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much Ronnie for a great review.
Comment from royowen
I'm not sure what sort of lust I'm reviewing here, whether it's between a man and woman, or between a person and bottle of booze! Either way the language is beautifully written with very erotic language, I wouldn't normally review these, not because of judgement, but temptation! But you can really write! Well done, Pam, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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I'm not sure what sort of lust I'm reviewing here, whether it's between a man and woman, or between a person and bottle of booze! Either way the language is beautifully written with very erotic language, I wouldn't normally review these, not because of judgement, but temptation! But you can really write! Well done, Pam, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thanks Roy and it's a man and a woman for sure. Thanks for a wonderful review and your awesome comments.
