Yosemite
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Christine Reveals & Bunkers Below"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from Nosha17
Inventive chapter with the arrival of the newcomers and the discovery of the bunker. Also, The ESP abilities of Christine should come in mighty useful. As always, well written and enjoyable. Sorry, if I don't contribute much, I am not too well at present, so don't spend as much time on the site. I will try to post something, though, every few days if I can. Faye.
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Inventive chapter with the arrival of the newcomers and the discovery of the bunker. Also, The ESP abilities of Christine should come in mighty useful. As always, well written and enjoyable. Sorry, if I don't contribute much, I am not too well at present, so don't spend as much time on the site. I will try to post something, though, every few days if I can. Faye.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
I have read that the national parks have underground bunkers so this is very plausible. Power is becoming a question. Maybe their are resiurces in the bunker. NG
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I have read that the national parks have underground bunkers so this is very plausible. Power is becoming a question. Maybe their are resiurces in the bunker. NG
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
They are discovering government secrets. Bunkers, weapons, supplies and possible mind control. This could be great for Johnny's group. Great work.
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They are discovering government secrets. Bunkers, weapons, supplies and possible mind control. This could be great for Johnny's group. Great work.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Ooohhhhh... How cool is that! A bunker right under their camp! I guess it's possible, being that Yosemite is owned by the govt. Reaching, sure, but why not? I love it! Love the arrows too, and Christine saying they had to be eliminated. LOL!
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Ooohhhhh... How cool is that! A bunker right under their camp! I guess it's possible, being that Yosemite is owned by the govt. Reaching, sure, but why not? I love it! Love the arrows too, and Christine saying they had to be eliminated. LOL!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
An interesting twist Mikey and I like it. Introducing these two characters. a bunker, fortress beneath Yosemite all the time. Wonder what supplies they got. maybe some morphine poppers. Man that -itch sure can reload arrows fast! Christine is ruthless, she doesn't trust anyone. She must want the camp for herself and location kept a secret so they need eliminated. She may be a turncoat. If I was the two soldiers I would lie about my strength, only two in that bunker? You are moving along and working like a madman, how do you post two, three a day? You are a beast, Mikey. excellent!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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An interesting twist Mikey and I like it. Introducing these two characters. a bunker, fortress beneath Yosemite all the time. Wonder what supplies they got. maybe some morphine poppers. Man that -itch sure can reload arrows fast! Christine is ruthless, she doesn't trust anyone. She must want the camp for herself and location kept a secret so they need eliminated. She may be a turncoat. If I was the two soldiers I would lie about my strength, only two in that bunker? You are moving along and working like a madman, how do you post two, three a day? You are a beast, Mikey. excellent!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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Christine trusts Johnny! You would know what would be in that bunker. It was unmanned and these two were just caretakers. It was like a just in case location. So, it wouldn't be actively used, but it would be ready if needed in an emergency. So these two were on duty to keep an eye on it. The forest rangers are cool too. One of them, the chick, knows about the global warming disaster angel, so some explanation for that will be coming. I keep throwing stuff out there without thinking. Hahaha. Then I have to figure out an explanation!!! mikey
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I like surprises, Mikey. I don't like shows when I know what is gonna happen. You're doing good and probably better than most. That disaster angel has me wondering ... I don't see how you do it? you posted two chapters today, that takes time, then, answer replies to reviews and do reviews. You sure--you ain't got an elf shop up in California or are you a clone and got lots of twins? Today is my review day. i learned, if you don't do reviews, you want get many, you got to make allies, this is word warfare! You must be Hitler! LOL (HUMOR)
Comment from faragon
I'm really liking this story. This weekend I plan on reading it from the start as I came in on the middle of it. I like where you are taking it. I keep expecting there to be some odd twist like this all being a dream of Johnny's & none of this is real.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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I'm really liking this story. This weekend I plan on reading it from the start as I came in on the middle of it. I like where you are taking it. I keep expecting there to be some odd twist like this all being a dream of Johnny's & none of this is real.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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I promise, no cop-out twist! I may go down in flames, but no it was all a dream ending. It may be a nightmare for me though. Hahaha. I keep throwing things in without thinking about them first! mikey
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Glad to hear that! It would have been so predictable & from what I've read so far...not your style! :D
Comment from c_lucas
I would say having two deadly arrows missing by inches would easily be a "pucker 5" This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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I would say having two deadly arrows missing by inches would easily be a "pucker 5" This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from seaglass
Will be interesting to know how they built the bunker and got the supplies into in the park without machinery. If they have tools that can do that, the group could use it to build a fort. Keep following your muse.
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Will be interesting to know how they built the bunker and got the supplies into in the park without machinery. If they have tools that can do that, the group could use it to build a fort. Keep following your muse.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
