Jealousy
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Comment from reconciled
I know where it came from.......it lived in front of me. outstanding poetry......I read it three times so far.....I would give this a seven if I could. This is what happened...God showed you.................love you Michael
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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I know where it came from.......it lived in front of me. outstanding poetry......I read it three times so far.....I would give this a seven if I could. This is what happened...God showed you.................love you Michael
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Aww, Michael, thank you so much my lovely friend. Three times? Goodness! Your review has... Michael, I can't put it into words. You have said something so lovely, I just don't know what to say. I love you too. Truly. xxx Sandra
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow, this is a more somber piece coming from you. It shows the strength of your writing skills and how multi-dimensional you can be.
You took an emotion and wrote about it explicitly. Defined it well and told a story.
Very creative and done in good taste. John
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Wow, this is a more somber piece coming from you. It shows the strength of your writing skills and how multi-dimensional you can be.
You took an emotion and wrote about it explicitly. Defined it well and told a story.
Very creative and done in good taste. John
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, John, what a lovely review and what a nice thing to say. Thank you! :) xsx sandra
Comment from Gungalo
You told his love that he loved only you,
And broke her heart just like you wanted to.
She went away without saying a word,
But whispers on the wind is how he heard.
Sigh it is so not you girl. But it is a very dangerous thing to do ... let jealousy get the upper hand. Awesome write girl.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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You told his love that he loved only you,
And broke her heart just like you wanted to.
She went away without saying a word,
But whispers on the wind is how he heard.
Sigh it is so not you girl. But it is a very dangerous thing to do ... let jealousy get the upper hand. Awesome write girl.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Gungalo. I have seen jealousy destroy a friend, so horrible to be like that. Thanks my dear friend. xsx Sandra
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Smile Sandra.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi sandramithchell,
The Green-eyed goddess is a lady who does more damage than most realise. Well expressed in your poem though.
Good rhythm and a strong message.
Patrick
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Hi sandramithchell,
The Green-eyed goddess is a lady who does more damage than most realise. Well expressed in your poem though.
Good rhythm and a strong message.
Patrick
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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You are so right, Patrick, jealousy is like a disease, with no cure. Thank you so much for this lovely review. :) Sandra
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow, What a picture!
Sandra this isn't your usual but it is very good!
You are scolding someone because she was jealous and told a lie. Two deadly sins. Said he loved her so his true love went away breaking his heart. Two victims. What possible satisfaction comes from such a deed. She still couldn't win. The eternal triangle.Very well done and yes the picture is just right. xsx Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Wow, What a picture!
Sandra this isn't your usual but it is very good!
You are scolding someone because she was jealous and told a lie. Two deadly sins. Said he loved her so his true love went away breaking his heart. Two victims. What possible satisfaction comes from such a deed. She still couldn't win. The eternal triangle.Very well done and yes the picture is just right. xsx Nancy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Nancy. I searched everywhere for picture to go with this poem. lOl, it couldn't be bright and happy. Thanks so much my dear, for this really lovely review. :) xsx Sandra
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Well my dear you found it! :<)
Comment from lakeport
Jealousy. indedd, that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem. very nice rhyming and flow. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Jealousy. indedd, that's a very heartfelt expressed story poem. very nice rhyming and flow. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Lakeport, for this lovely review! :) Sandra
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your welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from hsnyder0509
Wow! Well done! I really enjoyed this piece. Yes it is sad but I feel like it is very relatable. You rhyme in most places which makes it flow easily. It makes it an easy read. Thank you for sharing! :)
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Wow! Well done! I really enjoyed this piece. Yes it is sad but I feel like it is very relatable. You rhyme in most places which makes it flow easily. It makes it an easy read. Thank you for sharing! :)
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you for so much reading! I am so very pleased you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yep, that's sad and kind of weepy, but it's hard to feel to sorry for someone who blindly believes what an ex says. Still, it was a nasty thing to do.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Yep, that's sad and kind of weepy, but it's hard to feel to sorry for someone who blindly believes what an ex says. Still, it was a nasty thing to do.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Cindy for this lovely review. :) Sandra
