Senryu (Faith)
Senryu27 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
A real important senryu for man to extend his belief by exposing one of God's measures of His faith in a man. Jesus renews our faith. Man is fooling around with God's planet and may lose face - if not more.
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A real important senryu for man to extend his belief by exposing one of God's measures of His faith in a man. Jesus renews our faith. Man is fooling around with God's planet and may lose face - if not more.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from NicciFaye
LOL...I find this somewhat humorous and a pun to those that don't have faith nor believe...they get buried in their physical truths rather free in their spiritual awakening.
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LOL...I find this somewhat humorous and a pun to those that don't have faith nor believe...they get buried in their physical truths rather free in their spiritual awakening.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from krys123
Mikey, an excellent piece of work very creative, illuminative and resourceful and shows your inventiveness and cleverness.
Thank you for sharing and posting of your poem for everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Mikey, an excellent piece of work very creative, illuminative and resourceful and shows your inventiveness and cleverness.
Thank you for sharing and posting of your poem for everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Hi Alex. Thank you so much for this great review. I am so insanely behind in answering these. I'm jumping ahead because I want to make sure that you know I appreciate your encouragement and the wonderful support you've been giving me. I read every word of your reviews and I am delighted with the kind words and the galaxy of stars. The "real world" has been interfering with my time here, so I'm behind and trying to catch up. I hope to drop by soon and catch up on some of your fine work that I've been missing out on lately too. Thanks again. Blessings, mikey
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Mikey, you are so sincerely welcome and take your time and enjoy life things will come as they may.
Alex
Comment from Sasha
This is excellent. You do a marvelous job conveying that true faith is proof of things unseen...or is it? I am impressed at your ability to write both prose and poetry and do so well with both.
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This is excellent. You do a marvelous job conveying that true faith is proof of things unseen...or is it? I am impressed at your ability to write both prose and poetry and do so well with both.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Spitfire
Good one especially with the movie coming out. It's amazing what archaeologists discover under tons of dirt. Alliteration with buries and believers. Assonance with Noah and exposed.
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Good one especially with the movie coming out. It's amazing what archaeologists discover under tons of dirt. Alliteration with buries and believers. Assonance with Noah and exposed.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mikey
Well when you put your mind to something ... it sure happens. What an amazing senryu!!!! The satire is perfect ... WOW, you blow me away. Great grammatically connected lines and a BIG BANG of a satori. Alvin would love this. I love this. :)))
Just to note - a senryu is titled: senryu (first line of poem)
- thus senryu (avalanche buries). Super presentation. Great alliteration in "buries/believers". I love the juxtaposition. A powerful piece. I wish I had a six for this. Great work. Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
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Hi Mikey
Well when you put your mind to something ... it sure happens. What an amazing senryu!!!! The satire is perfect ... WOW, you blow me away. Great grammatically connected lines and a BIG BANG of a satori. Alvin would love this. I love this. :)))
Just to note - a senryu is titled: senryu (first line of poem)
- thus senryu (avalanche buries). Super presentation. Great alliteration in "buries/believers". I love the juxtaposition. A powerful piece. I wish I had a six for this. Great work. Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I'm not schooled in the rules of short poems but I have heard that Noah's Arc may have been exposed. Has there been a new sighting that fueled another attempt to get there? Wouldn't it be great if it was really there? Thoughts to ponder. Nancy
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I'm not schooled in the rules of short poems but I have heard that Noah's Arc may have been exposed. Has there been a new sighting that fueled another attempt to get there? Wouldn't it be great if it was really there? Thoughts to ponder. Nancy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Nosha17
You have conveyed an important message for non-believers. Faith is proof of things unseen. In just a few lines one can be inspired to believe. Nice illustration and enjoyable read. Faye
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You have conveyed an important message for non-believers. Faith is proof of things unseen. In just a few lines one can be inspired to believe. Nice illustration and enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. Faith will help you find your way. Noah's Ark is not a myth. Faith is a powerful part of the mind. It can make your life happier.
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Faith will help you find your way. Noah's Ark is not a myth. Faith is a powerful part of the mind. It can make your life happier.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Tatarka2
Beautiful. Would you consider this a 5 1/2? I can't keep giving the same people all my 6's. Oh, what the heck. I really think it does deserve a 6, even though it's so short, probably specifically because of that. You've said so much with a very few, well-chosen words. So a 6 it is.
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Beautiful. Would you consider this a 5 1/2? I can't keep giving the same people all my 6's. Oh, what the heck. I really think it does deserve a 6, even though it's so short, probably specifically because of that. You've said so much with a very few, well-chosen words. So a 6 it is.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
