Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Constipated Candice"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
4 total reviews
Comment from joneau2
A very interesting, very well written story. The dialogue is excellent, as is the grammar. It's easy to tell that you're a very accomplished writer. I suppose I've used enough of the "very" superlative. But, very well done.
P,S. Can you review my latest post, "The Old Man." It's a contest entry.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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A very interesting, very well written story. The dialogue is excellent, as is the grammar. It's easy to tell that you're a very accomplished writer. I suppose I've used enough of the "very" superlative. But, very well done.
P,S. Can you review my latest post, "The Old Man." It's a contest entry.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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You're very kind, thak you
Comment from comanalbert
You do know a lot about the models' world. Also, you are a portrait artist, in few words you've drawn up the lord and his model quite nicely. This is one of my favorite stories around here...
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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You do know a lot about the models' world. Also, you are a portrait artist, in few words you've drawn up the lord and his model quite nicely. This is one of my favorite stories around here...
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you. In fact, I do indeed draw portraits (in charcoal) You're very kind. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Adri7enne
Just pure fun, snod. I could see Oz getting back in the game, drooling over the pretty girls. I love Lord Hever's description of his working method with the models - to finally tell us what the difference was with Daisy. She's unique. "Daisy made the photographer look great. That's the difference..." Terrific, snod. You give a great description of Daisy. Can't wait to meet her. You too? LOL!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Just pure fun, snod. I could see Oz getting back in the game, drooling over the pretty girls. I love Lord Hever's description of his working method with the models - to finally tell us what the difference was with Daisy. She's unique. "Daisy made the photographer look great. That's the difference..." Terrific, snod. You give a great description of Daisy. Can't wait to meet her. You too? LOL!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Shh! I meet her every night in my dreams, but don't tell. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it
Comment from CR Delport
This is well written for an smooth an interesting read. Your dialogue is smooth and easy to follow. The characters seem interesting and full of promise. I found no obvious errors.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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This is well written for an smooth an interesting read. Your dialogue is smooth and easy to follow. The characters seem interesting and full of promise. I found no obvious errors.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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You're very kind, thank you. Glad it held your interest
