Comment from MagKing

Excellent

Bear each other's burdens, share care.

The true identity of the followers of Christ...
Even as He told His disciples "Love one another, by this all men will know that you're my disciples" John 13:34-35
Congratulations on your winning!

MagKing

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this one and it's message. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Congratulations on your win for the 1-6-1 poem, your poem shows that to care for each other is so important, a great message in this poem.

Well done. Mary

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

Thank you so much for the great review and good wishes. :-) Carolyn

reply by Jackarrie on 28-Mar-2014

You are welcome. Mary

Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning the contest. Very well deserved. It also sends a message of family life; care for each others, even when we are not in perfect health. Love them anyway!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

Thanks for your wonderful comments and encouragement.

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Good; a 1-6-1 with a pure and clear message. When you carry the cross for others, you love properly - you simply CARE! Nice work; good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

Thank you for this wonderful review.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Nice uplifting message and goo use of this unusual 1-6-1 style (very difficult to make meaningful within the limits of the form and not sound forced) to convey the message with compassion and good rhymes. Fine alliteration of B as ell. Nice presentation. A strong contender for my vote. Well done

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

I appreciate all you have said and certainly the vote. :-)

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

This is a sincere look into the life's cycle of tender loving care.
Not a day should go by without it practiced.
Charlene

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks Charlene for your thoughtful review.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I love this poem...so small and so meaningful...care and help those who need it...no matter who it is...a great poem and very well written...

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks for enjoying and understanding this short poem, :-)

reply by l.raven on 27-Mar-2014

you are so welcome...luff

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

good pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 1/6/1 syllable count for this contest
other's burdens - add apostrophe
solid rhymes at end of each line and a thoughtful message
Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks Brooke for this wonderful review . :-)

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

This is nice in showing care and compassion. You said a lot in your 1-6-1 and I wish you luck in the contest. The picture is just a most complimentary choice to your words - Dinah

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks Dinah for this sweet review and best wishes. :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

What a beautifully written, wonderfully thought out 1-6-1, Mystery Poet. Your message truly resonated with me as I volunteer to talk with nursing home residents. Caring, just a little, can make all the difference to someone.

Excellent work!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

You are so right Dean, just a little sharing, caring and burden bearing can go a long way. I appreciate your fine thoughts. :-)

reply by Dean Kuch on 26-Mar-2014

You're very welcome