Comment from stanishmichelle

Excellent

Hello Adewpearl,

I pray when love is offered me,
The joy of it is all I see.
The poem was uplifing for me to read as I reflected on its meaningful words. I also like the photo. Michelle

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, stanishmichelle :-) Brooke

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Good advice Brooke to all - run towards and embrace love. This flows freely and warms the heart of the reader. Great rispetto.
Teresa

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

The joy and carefree nature that you will only notice in a child. If only us adults can retain more of that child-like innocence and joy. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

CR, thank you so much :-)Brooke

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good use of the abab and the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with to/toward...seems/such...act/as...tender/touch. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Righteous Riter :-) Brooke

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Why act as if a tender touch
has snatched us in its grasping clutch?
I pray when love is offered me,
the joy of it is all I see.

Such a beautiful rispetto. Brooke. One to decipher what the meaning of love it. Sigh awesome ... tender touch.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Gungalo :-) Brooke

reply by Gungalo on 28-Mar-2014

Smiling at you Brooke.