Comment from me_tudor

Excellent

This was a fun, short poem. I'm afraid it is getting close to that spring cleaning time. But, quite frankly, I'm ready. I'm sick of it being cold.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Debbie, you made me giggle, because I can remember slinkys all too well. LOL If cobwebs are in a slinky, yes, it is definitely time. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

magical picture

I never had an untangled slinky long enough for it to get dirty. . .lucky kiddos

Nice little piece here

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie

Comment from G.B. Smith

Exceptional

Hi there cutie pie
You totally crack me up. My granddaughter just on Sunday showed me her dirty slinky. It must be spring cleaning time.
Have a wonderful week
Bear

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks again, Bear~Debbie xx

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
did you say cleaning? Ah,I hate that word... lucky it's Autumn here... the only thing I have in common with these words is the slinky part... right when the 'C' word is used.
Fun senryu, very tidy write!

With our thoughts we create,
contract cleaners,
James xx

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Hi James,

I've actually been trying to do some sorting and organizing. I do have someone who cleans 3 hours a week for me. It just got too difficult for me to do it. Thank you, dear friend~Debbie xx

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Debbie, what a ingenious, inventiveness and illuminative cleverness To present date poem with such humor, facetiousness and flippancy and also your witticism played a big role in this writing. Thank you for sharing and posting of your work and may you always find love.
Alex

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed evening~Debbie

Comment from JW

Excellent

Just what I need - A dirty, stinky :-) senyru.

Actually, I used to enjoy playing with slinkys as a kid.

It makes one wonder how something so simple, could be so entertaining.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Amazing how easily we used to be entertained. I wonder if they still make slinky. They have probably become a computer game or at least motorized. Take care, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Robert Lee Brown

Excellent

Debbie, this is a very cute write. I enjoyed the read which is enhanced by the picture. Thanks for sharing your creativity with your old friend, Bob

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend~Debbie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh darn!!!! Must we spring clean??? Mine is actually summer cleaning, when school is out for the summer. LOL It still has to be done. Your poem is cute and creative.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

I've been sorting and organizing a bit. I am fortunate to have a homemaker 3 hours a week. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Debbie - strong word choices for this senryu - I can never remember the rules for this one - human emotion?? At any rate I thought you penned it well, made me think too.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks. Take care, my friend~Debbie