Treasure is Transported
rhyming quatrains152 total reviews
Comment from L.M.Mullins
Very nice children's poem. Makes me think of spring and my lawn, which will have the most golden dandelions in our town. Thanks for the post.
L.M.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
Very nice children's poem. Makes me think of spring and my lawn, which will have the most golden dandelions in our town. Thanks for the post.
L.M.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Linda, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from nancyjam
Knew you would soon be sharing
dandelion poems! it's a right of spring here on FS
Love this one about "spreading springtime cheer"
blowing dandelions. Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
Knew you would soon be sharing
dandelion poems! it's a right of spring here on FS
Love this one about "spreading springtime cheer"
blowing dandelions. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Nancy :-) Brooke
Comment from Bayberry
I really love this one, Brooke. Dandelions are edible, too, and so it's a good thing when the seeds get spread around...well, maybe not for some people. :O) Smiles, Janet
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
I really love this one, Brooke. Dandelions are edible, too, and so it's a good thing when the seeds get spread around...well, maybe not for some people. :O) Smiles, Janet
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Janet, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
Dandelion's are a field full of treasures for the little ones to play with. It is a cheery little poem Brooke just in time for dandelion season:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
Dandelion's are a field full of treasures for the little ones to play with. It is a cheery little poem Brooke just in time for dandelion season:)
Teresa
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
You have found this niche that is
only yours, having your poetry, which
by the way certainly stands by itself
in its beauty and excellence, but
now you have Sawyer, and that gives
you the frosting on the cake.
As always, a piece of poetry that
is a delight to read.
Well done
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
You have found this niche that is
only yours, having your poetry, which
by the way certainly stands by itself
in its beauty and excellence, but
now you have Sawyer, and that gives
you the frosting on the cake.
As always, a piece of poetry that
is a delight to read.
Well done
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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fastdigits, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I knew it was just a matter of time before you got back to praising dandelions. LOL! Oh, well, let the little buggers bloom... I'm so glad the snow is gone (new record for longest continual snow cover here) that I will love seeing all that yellow...until, of course, they turn to white and "snow" all over the lawn to make more....eeeeyaaaahhhhhH!
BUt then little kids enjoy them so much, who am I to spoil their fun? :)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
I knew it was just a matter of time before you got back to praising dandelions. LOL! Oh, well, let the little buggers bloom... I'm so glad the snow is gone (new record for longest continual snow cover here) that I will love seeing all that yellow...until, of course, they turn to white and "snow" all over the lawn to make more....eeeeyaaaahhhhhH!
BUt then little kids enjoy them so much, who am I to spoil their fun? :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Phyllis - yep, pretty much anything beats all the damned snow :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke, a truly marvelous piece again you show your wisdom, creativity and resourcefulness in writing such an illuminative poem. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may you always find love wherever you are.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
Brooke, a truly marvelous piece again you show your wisdom, creativity and resourcefulness in writing such an illuminative poem. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may you always find love wherever you are.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke, you are so entirely and sincerely welcome.
Alex
Comment from Rondeno
Amen! It's always wonderful to see new life sown, especially when it happens to be beautiful life. There's no better time to do it than in the Spring, and no-one better to have charge of it than the young. All of this your poem and its accompanying photo say with poise and elegance, Brooke.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
Amen! It's always wonderful to see new life sown, especially when it happens to be beautiful life. There's no better time to do it than in the Spring, and no-one better to have charge of it than the young. All of this your poem and its accompanying photo say with poise and elegance, Brooke.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Michael, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this......a career .......spreading springtime cheer.....
This is just great.....I love your sweet Sawyer poems.....
Well written .................................
God bless
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
I love this......a career .......spreading springtime cheer.....
This is just great.....I love your sweet Sawyer poems.....
Well written .................................
God bless
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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kiwijenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with seeds/deeds. Good alliteration with treasure/transported...be/best...can't/career...spreading/springtime. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with seeds/deeds. Good alliteration with treasure/transported...be/best...can't/career...spreading/springtime. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Righteous Riter, thank you so much :-) Brooke