Comment from James Dooney

Exceptional

This is really nice indeed. You get to the point nice and quickly and the language and your pic combine so nicely. Well done Brooke !

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

James, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Dandelion cheer is spread with ease in Nevada because the wind is always helping. The people who hate them are constantly fighting the never won battle. I am on your side, I think they are quite beautiful. The only drawback are the stems that are too stubborn to lay down and die when the seeds are sent on their way. Love the picture and your short poem. Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Nancy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Frankeddy

Exceptional

Lovely poem nice thought on the dandelion seed being transported with the
alliteration "spreading springtime". A positive thought for the cursed dandelion.
Beautiful accompanying picture of Sawyer, very serious.
Well presented in clear and bright setting.

Well done. Frankeddy

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Frankeddy, thank you so very much for your encouraging and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from zanya

Excellent

M-mm yes 'spreading springtime cheer ' what a delightful activity - the humble dandelion is a portent of better days ahead and such a cute pic

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

Brooke once again you have penned a poem that takes the reader in to see and feel the spring cheer as on spreads the golden carpet of dandelions

simple write with vivid images

your rhyme works well

good alliteration in
treasure, transported
spreading, springtime

cheers Smoothiecool....)Faye

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Faye, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Oh , what a lovely way to wake up to your message of spreading joy
by Sawyer's delicious face, by the simple wisdom of your poetic
words. Just a genuine gem. Pili

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 23-Mar-2014

You are so welcome. ;---). Pili

Comment from 3boysrule

Excellent

Brooke, I really enjoyed this poem. Spreading some springtime in the form of a dandelion; so much fun. As always, a wonderful read!
Dee

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Dee, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from rod007

Excellent

There is a very simple poignant message in this piece. Spreading joy and wonderment through these seeds that sprouts the golden carpet of nature's haven.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke - a lovely reminder to smile and have fun - spreading cheer should be common sense - yet sometimes I've noticed ( well more than sometimes) it seems easier to spread the darker emotions of sadness..
Loved reading and pondering this nugget of wisdom - always well done.
Cutie Pie looks great in that pose.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Maureen, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

So wonderful this little poem, Brooke. Brings back such sweet memories of our childhood. If the wind did not transport the seeds, we did it!!! Dandelions are beautiful, and brings the Spring in our hearts. Loved it. Fia

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Fia, thank you so much :-) Brooke