Treasure is Transported
rhyming quatrains152 total reviews
Comment from Janie King
They already have dandelions going to seed? Wow. our little guy sure looks like he's having a good time. Great poem as always. god loves you and so do i.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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They already have dandelions going to seed? Wow. our little guy sure looks like he's having a good time. Great poem as always. god loves you and so do i.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Janie, thank you so much :-) Yep, southern California is worlds ahead of us in terms of warm weather. Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I'll bet it feels good to have a cooperator now in spreading one of your favorite flowers: the dandelion. "Laying golden carpets" is a lovely bit of imagery. The picture of Sawyer blowing on a dandelion is charming. Love, Jeanie
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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I'll bet it feels good to have a cooperator now in spreading one of your favorite flowers: the dandelion. "Laying golden carpets" is a lovely bit of imagery. The picture of Sawyer blowing on a dandelion is charming. Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Jeanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Well Grandmother, Sawyer is at it again. Amazing how they love exploring everything. My little ones always enjoyed feeding the rabbits dandelions. Well done. Shalom to all.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Well Grandmother, Sawyer is at it again. Amazing how they love exploring everything. My little ones always enjoyed feeding the rabbits dandelions. Well done. Shalom to all.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Brooke,
I don't like dandelions but after reading your poem how I would love to view a carpet of yellow instead of 5 foot high snow banks.
Thank you for the thought of spring.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Hello Brooke,
I don't like dandelions but after reading your poem how I would love to view a carpet of yellow instead of 5 foot high snow banks.
Thank you for the thought of spring.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Gert, I sure hope my beloved dandelions beat out all this darned snow! LOL Thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from brittanydawngray
I love the picture and how it goes perfectly with your poem. I myself, love dandelions; as do many people. Just the feeling of finding one and making a wish and blowing the seeds away and watching them float in the air is a cherished moment within itself. Great poem :)
Brittany Dawn Gray
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I love the picture and how it goes perfectly with your poem. I myself, love dandelions; as do many people. Just the feeling of finding one and making a wish and blowing the seeds away and watching them float in the air is a cherished moment within itself. Great poem :)
Brittany Dawn Gray
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Brittany, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Brooke, this is a great posting. I wish I had six stars for it. That is what it deserves. Your talents continue to amaze me. Have a great weekend and bless you. Bob
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Brooke, this is a great posting. I wish I had six stars for it. That is what it deserves. Your talents continue to amaze me. Have a great weekend and bless you. Bob
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Bob, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
Seeding is definitely time to leave the dandelion alone. This is very well written with a good flow of word, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Seeding is definitely time to leave the dandelion alone. This is very well written with a good flow of word, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Charlie :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from JB Lynn
I think you've perfectly captured the boundless joy a child feels when blowing dandelion seeds. This used to be one of my favorite springtime activities.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I think you've perfectly captured the boundless joy a child feels when blowing dandelion seeds. This used to be one of my favorite springtime activities.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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JB Lynn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MissMerri
I wholeheartedly agree... How could there be a better way to spend time than helping God spread springtime cheer! I love this and think Sawyer should be given an award for inspiring so many wonderful poems. Ask Tom if there isn't some special award for special little muses. :p
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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I wholeheartedly agree... How could there be a better way to spend time than helping God spread springtime cheer! I love this and think Sawyer should be given an award for inspiring so many wonderful poems. Ask Tom if there isn't some special award for special little muses. :p
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Adonna, thank you so much :-) That would be so cute if Sawyer had his own little trophy. LOL Brooke
Comment from Gungalo
Laying golden carpets --
there can't be a career
where time is spent more wisely
than spreading springtime cheer.
Oh such a lovely review for your two favorite things ... Sawyer and dandelions. The mixture of the two is awesome Brooke.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Laying golden carpets --
there can't be a career
where time is spent more wisely
than spreading springtime cheer.
Oh such a lovely review for your two favorite things ... Sawyer and dandelions. The mixture of the two is awesome Brooke.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Gungalo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Smile.
