Treasure is Transported
rhyming quatrains152 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
Good abcb rhymes in your quatrains
Good use of alliteration throughout
Easy flow of words from one line to another
Good luck to Sawyer who seems to be helping to spread springtime cheer
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Good abcb rhymes in your quatrains
Good use of alliteration throughout
Easy flow of words from one line to another
Good luck to Sawyer who seems to be helping to spread springtime cheer
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
OH how cute. My kids loved to blow them when they were little. I saw a robin yesterday so I think spring is on its way. I hope so anyway. Lovely poem, Brooke. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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OH how cute. My kids loved to blow them when they were little. I saw a robin yesterday so I think spring is on its way. I hope so anyway. Lovely poem, Brooke. Miss Sally
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I really liked this, and it does go without saying the rhyme and the flow was perfect, the wording was so clever, as it is a springtime message, I love your photos of sawyer, such a cute dude!
Andrew
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I really liked this, and it does go without saying the rhyme and the flow was perfect, the wording was so clever, as it is a springtime message, I love your photos of sawyer, such a cute dude!
Andrew
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from DonandVicki
A lovely poem about dandelions, My brother hates the carpet of yellow that he has to deal with in spring in Ohio but in California that is all we have are weeds for a yard. I told my brother that you can eat them, The leaves and the flowers. He told me to have at it, Ha Ha, I wasn't that hungry. Nice verse. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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A lovely poem about dandelions, My brother hates the carpet of yellow that he has to deal with in spring in Ohio but in California that is all we have are weeds for a yard. I told my brother that you can eat them, The leaves and the flowers. He told me to have at it, Ha Ha, I wasn't that hungry. Nice verse. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Don and Vicki, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mountainwriter49
Happy Snowless, Freezeless and delightful spring-like Saturday night, Brooke!
Your dandelion poem is perfect. It goes without saying the poem is in spot-on-perfect meter and rhyme and flows smoothly. I like the theme and magic elements of the poem as it transported me to a time when I'd pick those dandelion seeds and blow them into space. (much to my dad's frustration)
Well done, my friend
Ray
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Happy Snowless, Freezeless and delightful spring-like Saturday night, Brooke!
Your dandelion poem is perfect. It goes without saying the poem is in spot-on-perfect meter and rhyme and flows smoothly. I like the theme and magic elements of the poem as it transported me to a time when I'd pick those dandelion seeds and blow them into space. (much to my dad's frustration)
Well done, my friend
Ray
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Ray - and now the weather is going sour on us again with snow predicted for Tuesday. Will it never end? LOL I'm so lucky that my dad loved wildflowers - our yard was covered in clover, buttercups, violets, dandelions and more, and we just sat back and enjoyed the flower show :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. I wish Spring was here, so I could watch the seeds, even weeds, blow in the wind. A nice poem and a good hope for the warmth and simple pleasure that will soon come.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Very nice. I wish Spring was here, so I could watch the seeds, even weeds, blow in the wind. A nice poem and a good hope for the warmth and simple pleasure that will soon come.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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lancellot, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwisteveh
I note the raggedy patch of lawn behind Sawyer in the photo - no doubt infested with darn dandelion weeds! :o)
Despite that curmudgeonly reply, I am often tempted to give the things a puff myself and to hell with the consequences.
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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I note the raggedy patch of lawn behind Sawyer in the photo - no doubt infested with darn dandelion weeds! :o)
Despite that curmudgeonly reply, I am often tempted to give the things a puff myself and to hell with the consequences.
Steve
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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LOL - thanks for the laugh and the review, Steve :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
Oh Brooke, you must have been in your glory with this one...Sawyer blowing a dandelion...just like grandma...LOl...I love your poem and your picture...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Oh Brooke, you must have been in your glory with this one...Sawyer blowing a dandelion...just like grandma...LOl...I love your poem and your picture...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Linda, thank you so much - the kid is just after Grandma's heart :-) Brooke
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Oh I can see that...LOL...luff
Comment from Pegcook
Beautiful photo! And the wisdom of treasure being transported in dandelion seeds sets my soul doing handsprings! The meter and rhyme move this piece along at an easy pace. Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Beautiful photo! And the wisdom of treasure being transported in dandelion seeds sets my soul doing handsprings! The meter and rhyme move this piece along at an easy pace. Thank you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Pegcook, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from juliaSjames
Glad to see you in springtime mode, Brooke, with this sprightly write about your favorite flower.
I don't know if gardeners appreciate those golden carpets. LOL But I do like to see this hardy flower poking its bright yellow head up in verges and waste lots.
Delightful quatrains.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Glad to see you in springtime mode, Brooke, with this sprightly write about your favorite flower.
I don't know if gardeners appreciate those golden carpets. LOL But I do like to see this hardy flower poking its bright yellow head up in verges and waste lots.
Delightful quatrains.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014
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Julia, we've had a few days of cool spring weather, and now we're headed back down to a prediction of snow for Tuesday. LOL I want to keep spring in the air. Thank you, my friend. Brooke :-)
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It's the same here, but the birds seem to think it's spring.
peace and blessings, julia
