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Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Plans, Hostages and More Hostages"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from Sasha
This is filled with awesome suspense and is a great cliff hanger. Once again I apologize for the short review but I am trying desperately to catch up. As usual, no suggestions, as I said, I am just along for the ride.
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This is filled with awesome suspense and is a great cliff hanger. Once again I apologize for the short review but I am trying desperately to catch up. As usual, no suggestions, as I said, I am just along for the ride.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from Nosha17
This is developing into a real live battle scene. Lots of planning ready for action. Narrative and descriptions and dialogue as always very good. Enjoyable read. Faye
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This is developing into a real live battle scene. Lots of planning ready for action. Narrative and descriptions and dialogue as always very good. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Mikey.
This chapter is full of tension and action. You really described well the landscape of the situation, with the invasion of the military. Your story is building well.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
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Hi, Mikey.
This chapter is full of tension and action. You really described well the landscape of the situation, with the invasion of the military. Your story is building well.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from 24chas
I love the levity Johnny possesses even when not appropriate. The tension is really ratcheting up in this chapter. I have a feeling all hell is going to break loose soon.
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I love the levity Johnny possesses even when not appropriate. The tension is really ratcheting up in this chapter. I have a feeling all hell is going to break loose soon.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from ragamuffin
Still going strong. Wondering if Russia is going to be ultimately behind the whole mess, part of a massive attack on the US and a few other "chosen" countries, or if they just took advantage of a situation.
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Still going strong. Wondering if Russia is going to be ultimately behind the whole mess, part of a massive attack on the US and a few other "chosen" countries, or if they just took advantage of a situation.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from seaglass
Things are getting tense. Your description is good so that the reader understands the setting. The characters are becoming very familiar to the reader now. I can't wait to read the outcome with the Russians.
My movie to quote is Monty Python "in Search of the Holy Grail" Run Away, run away"
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Things are getting tense. Your description is good so that the reader understands the setting. The characters are becoming very familiar to the reader now. I can't wait to read the outcome with the Russians.
My movie to quote is Monty Python "in Search of the Holy Grail" Run Away, run away"
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
It is getting mad conplicated!!! Yet you are keeping it clear and flowing. It makes it so realistic. Life is like this. Nothing goes as planned when everything is this shaterred and uncertain. You remember things like Rhonda and bring them in perfectly. The humor is so true to life. That is what a real relationship is. Moments that can only be shared by the couple. No one else would really be in tune enough to fall in to the rhythm. Great work!! NG
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It is getting mad conplicated!!! Yet you are keeping it clear and flowing. It makes it so realistic. Life is like this. Nothing goes as planned when everything is this shaterred and uncertain. You remember things like Rhonda and bring them in perfectly. The humor is so true to life. That is what a real relationship is. Moments that can only be shared by the couple. No one else would really be in tune enough to fall in to the rhythm. Great work!! NG
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much. A lot of the time the reviews I receive trigger Ideas and sometimes I remember things that people have said while I am writing. I am sure you have noticed a suggestion or two or three of yours show up in the story!! Thank you so much. Big smiles. You are most helpful and encouraging. mikey
Comment from GracieAnn
Clarice.....LOL. Better not be riding that a bomb, now no pun intended. Mikey, this is filled with suspense and is a great cliff hanger. Just a couple things, Spelled Christine two different ways-"I laughed at my own silly thought, as Cristine". I guess the Russians don't need a reason with their own little Napoleon at the helm. Good work. :0 GracieAnn
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Clarice.....LOL. Better not be riding that a bomb, now no pun intended. Mikey, this is filled with suspense and is a great cliff hanger. Just a couple things, Spelled Christine two different ways-"I laughed at my own silly thought, as Cristine". I guess the Russians don't need a reason with their own little Napoleon at the helm. Good work. :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Ah. Good, you've seen both of these movies. I'm still laughing after rattling on about some movie you've never seen yesterday. Hahaha. Oops, left the H out. I was thinking of making Putin a scrub nurse or something in the story! That might have worked in the other one. I'll save that.... mikey
Comment from CR Delport
Mmm, this now asks the question, is these rooskies the bad guys or only more victims looking for shelter and food? Another stunning chapter.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Mmm, this now asks the question, is these rooskies the bad guys or only more victims looking for shelter and food? Another stunning chapter.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Wow. That is a GREAT question. They just might be victims or perhaps at their wits end and ready to look for a different road to survival. Glad you liked this. I'm kind of back on track. A little bit more scary now with the mixed up world ready to pop in at any time. mikey
