Wilderness Encounter
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Chapter 3"A love story of two loners who meet by accident
4 total reviews
Comment from lindalcreel
Connie is afraid of something or someone, but she isn't willing to tell Liam what it is yet. Maybe for a short time she forgot that he saved her life and she needs to at least be hospitable. He is trying to get away from civilization too, but he isn't running from anyone in particular. We'll see where this is headed.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Connie is afraid of something or someone, but she isn't willing to tell Liam what it is yet. Maybe for a short time she forgot that he saved her life and she needs to at least be hospitable. He is trying to get away from civilization too, but he isn't running from anyone in particular. We'll see where this is headed.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your kind words and your perception.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from Carrie Carson
Good job with the drama of fighting a bear.
One teensy pick:
Para "Connie feels...else can she hid(e)?"
What does one do with a dead bear? :) Carrie
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Good job with the drama of fighting a bear.
One teensy pick:
Para "Connie feels...else can she hid(e)?"
What does one do with a dead bear? :) Carrie
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Carrie, for you nice review. Will make the corrections you suggested.
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Certainly, you're welcome. Thanks, again, for the contest vote, too. :) Carrie
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Certainly, you're welcome. Thanks, again, for the contest vote, too. :) Carrie
Comment from c_lucas
One minor problem, you introduce the girl wearing a bra and panties. I would think she would get dress before cooking. Other than that, this is very well written.
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back, covered with scares (scars)that looked
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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One minor problem, you introduce the girl wearing a bra and panties. I would think she would get dress before cooking. Other than that, this is very well written.
ERRORS
back, covered with scares (scars)that looked
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your kind and informative review. The error will be corrected and the attire of the girl will be addressed. I do appreciate you taking the time to read chapter 3. Do stop by again.
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You're welcome, Oldefoggie. Charlie
Comment from GracieAnn
oldefoggie, this is a read that flows nicely in the dialog, and the story line. It has elements of suspense, romance, humor and questions intriguing enough to want to read more about this couple that seems made for each other. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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oldefoggie, this is a read that flows nicely in the dialog, and the story line. It has elements of suspense, romance, humor and questions intriguing enough to want to read more about this couple that seems made for each other. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for kind review. I appreciate you stopping by, do come again.
