Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

This is excellent, Steve, and just how the story of the three Little pigs should be treated, I think. The acrostic form suits the story, too. The three Little pigs inspired me to start my first story... who knew it could be so inspirational?? lol, Giddy

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks, Giddy.

Now I'm really curious what that first story was about.

Steve

Comment from seaglass

Exceptional

This Acrostic poem get a six, keeps with requirements of Acrostic, rhymes in a delightful fashion and tells a traditional tale. too good for less stars.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for the great review and the six stars.

Steve

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This Fun with Acrostics writing prompt entry is certainly that. It is creative and gives a fresh spin on an old story. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks. GracieAnn

Steve

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

I giggled all the way through this, it is wonderful. You have quite the talent. I loved how the wolf was toast. Wish I had a six left, you would have it. Blessings and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the virtual six and especially the giggle!

Steve

reply by Matoshka on 19-Mar-2014

So welcome and I enjoyed it so much. Blessings, my friend.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is a wonderful retelling of the three pigs story. The wolf did enjoy himself for a while on all that fine pork, but tsk, tsk, the third pig outsmarts him at the end. Excellent rhymes in your acrostic poem. It flows well. A creative and fun response to the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the great review.

Steve

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

Another very clever contest entry. Do you and Sally, the musician, know each other? Your unique brain structures are quite similar. Excellent wordplay. I enjoyed this piece immensely. Best of luck in the contest. Blessing, Linda

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you.

I am not sure who you mean by Sally the Musician - is she a FanStory writer?

I've written a few of these fairy-tale acrostics now - must put them together in a book one day soon...

Steve

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

It spells the title, tells a story and rhymes. The rhythm is great and it moves along at a good pace. Good work, Steve. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Fantastic acrostic for The Three Little Pig strong and clever rhyming
good alliteration in mortar mix and crunchy crackling and rump/ribs/roast
love the commentary on how the first two expected their ill-conceived houses would work out
extremely funny closing - you've added humor and life to this old tale - a keeper :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Brooke, thanks so much for the great review.

Steve

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A fantastic entry. I don't see how anyone can beat that. An artistic rendition of a favorite fairy tale with unforced rhyming. Love this line:(Though none it seems was architected)very clever. Great ending.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the fantastic review.

Steve

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

What a wonderful job of re-telling the story! It's grown up in this poem. Love the rhymes, the rhythm, and the presentation is perfect.

Well done!

Av

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks, Av.

Steve