There Is No Way To Calculate
rhyming tercets152 total reviews
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, a very sweet love poem and who wouldn't be
in love with this little guy. Great job on the
rhyming. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Brooke, a very sweet love poem and who wouldn't be
in love with this little guy. Great job on the
rhyming. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
'Deeply smitten,' in four rhyming, cadenced, and non-calculating tercets, calculating what will be a long love affair. Good luck. Kenny
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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'Deeply smitten,' in four rhyming, cadenced, and non-calculating tercets, calculating what will be a long love affair. Good luck. Kenny
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Kenny, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Aussie
A full-sized page certainly makes a big difference to our office manager! You haven't written tercets for a while. I'm glad your love poem isn't all gooey, dripping with luscious lips and undulating hips! Instead, you have chosen to 'add' up human feelings which cannot be calculated. A love that cannot be denied - that does 'sum' up your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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A full-sized page certainly makes a big difference to our office manager! You haven't written tercets for a while. I'm glad your love poem isn't all gooey, dripping with luscious lips and undulating hips! Instead, you have chosen to 'add' up human feelings which cannot be calculated. A love that cannot be denied - that does 'sum' up your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Kay, thank you so much :-) Yeah, the luscious lips kind of poetry is not really for me. LOL Brooke
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Good - we agree to leave it to Gungalo! LOL.
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We certainly can agree she has the topic covered and then some. LOL
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Maybe we have lost the spark or can't see our toes! LOL.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I really enjoyed this poem so much , the rhyme was lovely as was the rhythm and the last verse was really nice , thank you , well done
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I really enjoyed this poem so much , the rhyme was lovely as was the rhythm and the last verse was really nice , thank you , well done
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mfowler
You keep coming up with these great little poems with excellent thoughts to ponder and connect to our lives. I just like the premise of this, that love and its true worth cannot be calculated, nor be described in enough suitable words. Your structure and meter, as usual, give the poem an easy rhythm for the reader to navigate, making the poem itself the centre of focus.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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You keep coming up with these great little poems with excellent thoughts to ponder and connect to our lives. I just like the premise of this, that love and its true worth cannot be calculated, nor be described in enough suitable words. Your structure and meter, as usual, give the poem an easy rhythm for the reader to navigate, making the poem itself the centre of focus.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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mfowler, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another beautiful and sentimental poem from the author in this post. The love we have for our family knows no bounds. It is a bond that cannot be broken. Family will be family no matter what.
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This is yet another beautiful and sentimental poem from the author in this post. The love we have for our family knows no bounds. It is a bond that cannot be broken. Family will be family no matter what.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, this Love Poem Poetry Contest entry is a creative and refreshing look at a special kind of love towards a child-the best kind. The rhyme and meter is very readable and fun. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Brooke, this Love Poem Poetry Contest entry is a creative and refreshing look at a special kind of love towards a child-the best kind. The rhyme and meter is very readable and fun. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
I identify completely with your heart, that is drawn to the source of your devotion! They play a huge influence in our lives! You have described your heart perfectly! The poem is an easy flowing delicacy, combined with sound rhyme and rhythm! Blessings, Brooke, Roy.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I identify completely with your heart, that is drawn to the source of your devotion! They play a huge influence in our lives! You have described your heart perfectly! The poem is an easy flowing delicacy, combined with sound rhyme and rhythm! Blessings, Brooke, Roy.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Roy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from The Death
It is so true, Brooke, we can not measure the love we have for our deer ones. You presented this thought playfully in these tercets.
I love the last verse the most as it beautifully sums up the essence of this poem.
Nice red background to reflect the love theme and white font for peaceful relation, without any complications.
I enjoyed reading this. :-)
Anupam
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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It is so true, Brooke, we can not measure the love we have for our deer ones. You presented this thought playfully in these tercets.
I love the last verse the most as it beautifully sums up the essence of this poem.
Nice red background to reflect the love theme and white font for peaceful relation, without any complications.
I enjoyed reading this. :-)
Anupam
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Anupam, thank you so much for your gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from nancyjam
Love can't be measured by calculators
or words express the feelings for a
dear one.
Charming poem in well rhymed and metered
tercets to tell how much Sawyer means to you.
Love this picture. Nancy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Love can't be measured by calculators
or words express the feelings for a
dear one.
Charming poem in well rhymed and metered
tercets to tell how much Sawyer means to you.
Love this picture. Nancy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Nancy, thanks so much :-) Brooke
