There Is No Way To Calculate
rhyming tercets152 total reviews
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Its been a long time. It is nice to see a Sawyer poem. You, as always, paint a wonderful word picture. Your heart shows with every line.
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Its been a long time. It is nice to see a Sawyer poem. You, as always, paint a wonderful word picture. Your heart shows with every line.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
Comment from donaldww
Nice parallel drawn between math calculations and human feelings. When we can't calculate something, it is easy to understand that problem is beyond our comprehension. But trying to express our feelings, in an abstract sense, is impossible.
Ergo the comparison to math, a concrete concept.
Good luck with the contest!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Nice parallel drawn between math calculations and human feelings. When we can't calculate something, it is easy to understand that problem is beyond our comprehension. But trying to express our feelings, in an abstract sense, is impossible.
Ergo the comparison to math, a concrete concept.
Good luck with the contest!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Donald :-) Brooke
Comment from LovnPeace
What a precious little boy and a fine descriptions of feelings of a proud grandma I think. Isn't this your grandson? He is precious. Blessings. Barbara
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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What a precious little boy and a fine descriptions of feelings of a proud grandma I think. Isn't this your grandson? He is precious. Blessings. Barbara
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Barbara. Yes, this is my one and only grandson :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
Ah, so cute! Grandma's in love. Easy to see, and easy to understand. The picture makes me grin. So cute.
Lovely use of verbs, great rhyming and the meter is dead on. Fun to read your stuff, Brooke. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Ah, so cute! Grandma's in love. Easy to see, and easy to understand. The picture makes me grin. So cute.
Lovely use of verbs, great rhyming and the meter is dead on. Fun to read your stuff, Brooke. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Adrienne, thank you. Me?? Smitten?? LOL Brooke
Comment from emrpoems
No way we can place a price on true love especially the love Sayer's granny has for him.LOL
Good rhyming tercets and a stunning presentation
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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No way we can place a price on true love especially the love Sayer's granny has for him.LOL
Good rhyming tercets and a stunning presentation
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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emrpoems, thanks for the laugh and the review. Are you suggesting I dote on my grandson??? LOL :-) Brooke
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Not at all I am making a statement not a suggestion. It is so evident and appropriate too. Keep on loving him. There is nothing better than loving those special innocent cuties--Erica
Comment from Just Pete
A winner surely. Perfectly rhymed, this is the epitome of real love and thus, a great love poem. The picture is so cute (as always) and I wish you the very best of luck in this contast.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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A winner surely. Perfectly rhymed, this is the epitome of real love and thus, a great love poem. The picture is so cute (as always) and I wish you the very best of luck in this contast.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Pete, thank you so very much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from mstad55
I think I'm calling a foul. You've got material to write about for at least 10 more years. If you have more grandchildren you can be writing cutesy stuff for years. nice job. mike
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I think I'm calling a foul. You've got material to write about for at least 10 more years. If you have more grandchildren you can be writing cutesy stuff for years. nice job. mike
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Mike, what can I say. I know I'm totally exploiting the cuteness of my precious grandson. LOL Thanks for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
He sure looks like he belongs there, Brooke! A wonderful poem describing the impossibility of expressing the worth of love. An enjoyable poem.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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He sure looks like he belongs there, Brooke! A wonderful poem describing the impossibility of expressing the worth of love. An enjoyable poem.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from closetpoetjester
Mmm I see Daddy has a little office boy ready to help here Brooke LOL
Cute little poem and indeed there are no words that can calculate the power of love and you've expressed that expertly here and in super rhyme.
I often find tercets falling short...like they need more in the stanza but yours felt complete and finished...though cleverly led into the next. How DO you do it woman? LOL
I LIKE this format. Some smart "ate" rhymes too. Well done, my friend.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Mmm I see Daddy has a little office boy ready to help here Brooke LOL
Cute little poem and indeed there are no words that can calculate the power of love and you've expressed that expertly here and in super rhyme.
I often find tercets falling short...like they need more in the stanza but yours felt complete and finished...though cleverly led into the next. How DO you do it woman? LOL
I LIKE this format. Some smart "ate" rhymes too. Well done, my friend.
Cheers P
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Phillippa. Daddy doesn't let Sawyer take over the office very often, so he was very much enjoying the power of the buttons. LOL Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Sawyer really sells this poem, as he seems to be trying his level best to calculate some unreachable summation. Your rhymes are clean and precise. You create a wonderful mood that seems to be a perfect accompaniment to that amazing photo of Sawyer.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Sawyer really sells this poem, as he seems to be trying his level best to calculate some unreachable summation. Your rhymes are clean and precise. You create a wonderful mood that seems to be a perfect accompaniment to that amazing photo of Sawyer.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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nomi, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
