There Is No Way To Calculate
rhyming tercets152 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
I really enjoyed this read, Brooke. You do a great job with the flow and made this a very interesting read. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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I really enjoyed this read, Brooke. You do a great job with the flow and made this a very interesting read. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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24chas, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
HI Brooke, it won't be long and he will be using that stuff...my grandkids both did...but doesn't he look perfect in that office...???...LOL..Brooke I remember when he was just a baby...boy do they grow up...I sooo love your poem...and always the picture...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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HI Brooke, it won't be long and he will be using that stuff...my grandkids both did...but doesn't he look perfect in that office...???...LOL..Brooke I remember when he was just a baby...boy do they grow up...I sooo love your poem...and always the picture...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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So far his biggest mathematical accomplishment is counting to twenty, but he's getting there fast! LOL Thanks so much, Linda :-) Brooke
Comment from NicciFaye
As always a wonderful poem for this Love Poem Contest with many blessings. It truly amazes me how much inspiration this growing young boy has on the poetic messages you share with us. Just beautiful.
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As always a wonderful poem for this Love Poem Contest with many blessings. It truly amazes me how much inspiration this growing young boy has on the poetic messages you share with us. Just beautiful.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
Comment from NightWriter
There Is No Way To Calculate is another captivating and beautifully written poem with rhyming tercets. Outstanding as always with the perfection of the skilled poet you are. Bravo!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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There Is No Way To Calculate is another captivating and beautifully written poem with rhyming tercets. Outstanding as always with the perfection of the skilled poet you are. Bravo!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Steve, thank you so very much, my friend :-) You've made my night with your generous stars. Brooke
Comment from Ted T
Hi Brooke :)
You did it again, you're on a roll with Sawyer in another gem.
Looks like you're putting together a book for his mom and yourself.
He looks in awe as he sees all that wonder around him.
When I was his age it was science fiction.
Ted
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke :)
You did it again, you're on a roll with Sawyer in another gem.
Looks like you're putting together a book for his mom and yourself.
He looks in awe as he sees all that wonder around him.
When I was his age it was science fiction.
Ted
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Ted, thank you so very much for your thoughtful reading of this poem and for your generous rating. Sawyer loves the minions in Despicable Me. I'm sure he'll graduate to science fiction of a more sophisticated nature after his second birthday. LOL :-) Brooke
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You're most welcome :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"There Is No Way To Calculate" is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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"There Is No Way To Calculate" is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Duchess, how lovely to hear from you. Thanks so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke, it's always a pleasure to read your work :- the Duchess
Comment from Dom G Robles
I'm learning but I see that this poem is a perfect rhyming in tetrameter. A four-stanza poem of a lovely kid trying to play on a calculator that is yet beyond his capacity to comprehend of what he is doing. But the looks of the child is most of prime importance. It is as if he is well versed in numbers, like a young mathematician, or a computer engineer. Congratulations Brooke. Dom
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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I'm learning but I see that this poem is a perfect rhyming in tetrameter. A four-stanza poem of a lovely kid trying to play on a calculator that is yet beyond his capacity to comprehend of what he is doing. But the looks of the child is most of prime importance. It is as if he is well versed in numbers, like a young mathematician, or a computer engineer. Congratulations Brooke. Dom
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Dom :-) Brooke
Comment from Selina Stambi
I like the rhyme scheme.
there's no need to calculate
a love that cannot be denied ... it always amazes me how you bring forth these rhyming gems of wisdom in such a simple, unpretentious manner, Brooke.
My best wishes in the contest.
Love,
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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I like the rhyme scheme.
there's no need to calculate
a love that cannot be denied ... it always amazes me how you bring forth these rhyming gems of wisdom in such a simple, unpretentious manner, Brooke.
My best wishes in the contest.
Love,
Sonali :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Sonali, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bayberry
This is a terrific tercet love poem flowing warmly around Sawyer. What a delight to read and understand the motivation for the heartfelt verses. Sincere best wishes, Brooke. :-) Janet
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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This is a terrific tercet love poem flowing warmly around Sawyer. What a delight to read and understand the motivation for the heartfelt verses. Sincere best wishes, Brooke. :-) Janet
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Janet, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is so true and there will always be times when the numbers don't add up and the words aren't there and we just have to go with our gut and have faith. Great job
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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This is so true and there will always be times when the numbers don't add up and the words aren't there and we just have to go with our gut and have faith. Great job
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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ExperiencingLiphe, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
