There Is No Way To Calculate
rhyming tercets152 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
This is a catchy love poem. the three line verses with the rhyming pattern, first two lines rhyming and final lines rhyming give it an interesting twist. Is there a name for this structure of rhyme? I think grandmother really loves Sawyer.
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This is a catchy love poem. the three line verses with the rhyming pattern, first two lines rhyming and final lines rhyming give it an interesting twist. Is there a name for this structure of rhyme? I think grandmother really loves Sawyer.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
Comment from tfawcus
He certainly looks as if the whole world is his oyster in that photograph! No wonder you had to write a poem about it!
Let us hope most sincerely that he does not become a slave to those machines! I'm feel sure that you provide a very good counterbalance!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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He certainly looks as if the whole world is his oyster in that photograph! No wonder you had to write a poem about it!
Let us hope most sincerely that he does not become a slave to those machines! I'm feel sure that you provide a very good counterbalance!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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tfawcus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
Wow, just when I think you can write no more wonderfully, you hit me with another one of you fantastic rhymes. I also loved the bright colors that match the brightness of little Man.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Wow, just when I think you can write no more wonderfully, you hit me with another one of you fantastic rhymes. I also loved the bright colors that match the brightness of little Man.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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amahra, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. Ah, hese Sawyer poems. Such a delight to read, the love of you have for him always shines through. i think that is a huge part of what I like about them.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hello. Ah, hese Sawyer poems. Such a delight to read, the love of you have for him always shines through. i think that is a huge part of what I like about them.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Blessings
Great presentation, good rhyme, and good rhythm. Great imagery. Great meaning of true love. Good luck on the contest. Angel Blessings
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Great presentation, good rhyme, and good rhythm. Great imagery. Great meaning of true love. Good luck on the contest. Angel Blessings
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Angel Blessings, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
Beautifully written in every way
What a wonderful picture of Sawyer.
No one could calculate the love we feel for our loved ones
Especially this special boy.
I have no six
Annie
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Beautifully written in every way
What a wonderful picture of Sawyer.
No one could calculate the love we feel for our loved ones
Especially this special boy.
I have no six
Annie
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Annie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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I really loved what you wrote here Brooke.
Annie
Comment from angelface2
Ah, Brooke, this is a tidy little love poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Very smooth flow of words. Sawyer looks like he is about to say, 'Can I help you?' Love it. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Ah, Brooke, this is a tidy little love poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Very smooth flow of words. Sawyer looks like he is about to say, 'Can I help you?' Love it. Miss Sally
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from rama devi
Love this charming entry for the contest, Brooke. Superb rhyming and echoed lines in the opening and closing, tying the poem together like a ribbon on a gift. It's expressive, well rhymed and timed and finely presented with your cute little guy.
Good phonetics, as usual. I like how calculate and articulate share consonance of C as well as rhyming. Nice consonance and alliteration of C and W in first stanza, L in the second and third,
Favorite lines:
for feelings never hesitate,
and there's no need to calculate
a love that cannot be denied.
Nice one. Lovely theme--well voiced.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Love this charming entry for the contest, Brooke. Superb rhyming and echoed lines in the opening and closing, tying the poem together like a ribbon on a gift. It's expressive, well rhymed and timed and finely presented with your cute little guy.
Good phonetics, as usual. I like how calculate and articulate share consonance of C as well as rhyming. Nice consonance and alliteration of C and W in first stanza, L in the second and third,
Favorite lines:
for feelings never hesitate,
and there's no need to calculate
a love that cannot be denied.
Nice one. Lovely theme--well voiced.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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rama devi,thank you so much :-) so glad you like the theme as well as the composition. Brooke
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Comment from Rainbowsofhappiness
A sweet tender poignant poem that conveys the writer's emotions through the words thus delivering a last impact on the reader as well. The photograph accompanying this poem is well suited to further evoke the images that the writer passionately describes through her words. The emotions of love and admiration for her child are prominent in this poem through the word choices and using the analogy of calculating the writer's love for her child through the use of mathematical terms is creative and unique in a love poem. The love a parent has for their child truly can never be put into words or given an exact amount, that love is eternal and infinite. Well written, great analogy throughout, and the photo adds to the unspoken words that are present, yet unsaid. Beautiful sentiment!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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A sweet tender poignant poem that conveys the writer's emotions through the words thus delivering a last impact on the reader as well. The photograph accompanying this poem is well suited to further evoke the images that the writer passionately describes through her words. The emotions of love and admiration for her child are prominent in this poem through the word choices and using the analogy of calculating the writer's love for her child through the use of mathematical terms is creative and unique in a love poem. The love a parent has for their child truly can never be put into words or given an exact amount, that love is eternal and infinite. Well written, great analogy throughout, and the photo adds to the unspoken words that are present, yet unsaid. Beautiful sentiment!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Rainbows, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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No problem you are most welcome. As usual you created a sweet and tender piece of poetry! :-)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the worth that cannot be calculated in dollars and cents. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the worth that cannot be calculated in dollars and cents. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
