Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A beautifully presented poem for your twins Birthday. I didn't realize Phyllis was so talented with her artwork. I think use of poetic license is good. If we all wrote the same way, it would be awfully boring. I would just post it as a 5-5-8, there is nothing wrong with that. Hugs, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thanks for your comments Debbie, I was delighted with Phyllis picture as well. Have a great week-end. Love, Carolyn

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

What a beautiful layout here, notesandmore. Phyllis has some great pictures, eh? I love the shade of green. I have twin daughters as well but not born on St. Paddy's Day. Lovely write, woman. I'm sure your daughters, Love it!

Gloria

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thanks Gloria, I appreciate this fine review. Phyllis is a lady of many talents isn't she? What age are your daughters?
:-) Carolyn

reply by Gloria .... on 20-Mar-2014

They are twenty-seven and already checking for wrinkles. LOL.

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

I can tell you have enjoyed them. Have a good night.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Twin Shamrocks, Happy Birthday Stephanie ang Suzanne, two lucky twins, that's a very lovely 5/5/8/ poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for this sweet review. I will tell the girls of your Birthday greetings. :-) Carolyn

reply by lakeport on 19-Mar-2014

your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport,

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

thank you for sharing this little piece. . .nice , and yet. . ., when kids are aging. . .how did they get so old?

Happy birthday to them

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

Especially when we stay the same age, right? Thanks for the awesome comments. :-) Carolyn

reply by Petriesan on 18-Mar-2014

yes, we never age. . .so how the kids?

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn. :-)

This is cute and lovely. I like the simple message it conveys.
Please accept my best wishes and convey to them on my behalf. :-)
It is so fortunate that they were born on this special day.
I love the presentation too.
Thank you for sharing.

Have a great day!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

And thank you Anupam for this great review, I will tell the girls HB from you. :-) Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I thought the artwork you choose to post to go with your poem is awesome.
Happy Birthday to your angels. I am, proud to say also.
56 years ago I give birth to my son Phillip Charles my first born. He truly has the luck of the Irish and the blessing from God for a few years ago I thought he was going to die. his brother and sister are in heaven at the age ot 32and 41. .

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

I will tell the girls they share a birthday with your son. Tell Phillip Charles we all wish him the very best of health. He certainly has a wonderful mother. :-) Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 18-Mar-2014

Thank you for those kind words and I will tell him today.

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. Your daughters are roughly the same age as me. I am 44. The time just rolls by. It seems like only yesterday when I was in school and dreaming of big things in life. I am still dreaming and I hope my dreams come true some day.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

Never stop dreaming. That keeps us motivated. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem. :-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 18-Mar-2014

I will keep dreaming all right.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, this is a great three lined write that pays homage to two very special blessings in your life. The personification of the shamrocks is creative. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

Thanks GracieAnn, for the review and sweet comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this short poem about your two leprechauns who are all grown up. i enjoyed reading this one....

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

And they are very 'spritely' little lasses. :-) Thank you, I am happy you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

A great day it is to celebrate on my favorite day with the Irish altho I am only a one forth so to speak, I still love the music and the wearing of the green. HAPPY 40TH GIRLS

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

Thanks for your great comments. I enjoyed the review. :-) Carolyn