No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
A lovely word picture for Sawyer, and a nice play on the words to make it. It carries a lovely message too.
Patrick
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke,
A lovely word picture for Sawyer, and a nice play on the words to make it. It carries a lovely message too.
Patrick
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much, my gracious and generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting and beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. Luna is a beautiful thing indeed and I love to look up at the moon in wonder myself.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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This is yet another interesting and beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. Luna is a beautiful thing indeed and I love to look up at the moon in wonder myself.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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My pleasure.
Comment from strandregs
Very nice . You got a nice idea of unknown . And
The ever philosofical and practical moto .
If you want to win the lottery
Buy a ticket!
Z.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Very nice . You got a nice idea of unknown . And
The ever philosofical and practical moto .
If you want to win the lottery
Buy a ticket!
Z.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Z :-) Brooke
Comment from barkingdog
Hi Brooke,
I now have another word for butterfly. Thank you.
I like the rhyme and even tempo in this piece as well as the philosophy. One never knows what to expect until we look up to see.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke,
I now have another word for butterfly. Thank you.
I like the rhyme and even tempo in this piece as well as the philosophy. One never knows what to expect until we look up to see.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Ellen :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
Now, Brooke, when I NEED an 'author note' explanation, you don't give one for 'Mariposa'. :-)
Excellent trochaic meter and thought-provoking write. Indeed, to 'see' is far more vivid than to 'look'.
Nice one!
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Now, Brooke, when I NEED an 'author note' explanation, you don't give one for 'Mariposa'. :-)
Excellent trochaic meter and thought-provoking write. Indeed, to 'see' is far more vivid than to 'look'.
Nice one!
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I swear the author note is there, my friend - scroll down and try again. LOL Thank you, Ted :-) Brooke
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Sorry, Brooke - it is, though I still don't know what it means.
I missed it the 1st time, as I've mislaid my spectacles and was having to read through the bottoms of two beer glasses for magnification. ;-) xx
Comment from dennis0530
Dedicating this poem to a child is such a magical and charming gift. Did our poet offer the moon to Sawyer? Much like a suitor offers it to his loved one? If so, will it bring more than smiles and laughter to the child knowing luna was given to him? I could hear a long and delightful squeal. Therein lies more mystery for him. Might he be asking a question to his fertile young mind: How do I take home this gift?
A shining orb in the sky and a fluttering butterfly - these two magical creations will give any child endless mysteries to delight on. When the moon wanes and the butterfly flutters away, will the child search for both? On their return, the cycle of mystery lives on.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Dedicating this poem to a child is such a magical and charming gift. Did our poet offer the moon to Sawyer? Much like a suitor offers it to his loved one? If so, will it bring more than smiles and laughter to the child knowing luna was given to him? I could hear a long and delightful squeal. Therein lies more mystery for him. Might he be asking a question to his fertile young mind: How do I take home this gift?
A shining orb in the sky and a fluttering butterfly - these two magical creations will give any child endless mysteries to delight on. When the moon wanes and the butterfly flutters away, will the child search for both? On their return, the cycle of mystery lives on.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I would travel to the moon and back to get Sawyer anything he wants :-) Thank you so much, Dennis :-) Brooke
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Dear Brooke,
If all goes well as planned, your "would travel to the moon" could become a reality. Within ten years, Virgin Atlantic(if I remember right)will have scheduled commercial flights to the moon. Your chance to bring home a piece of luna for Sawyer. Question is, will it be affordable? I hope FS will sponsor contests offering flight tickets to the moon as prizes. First Prize winner - a round trip ticket; Consolation prize - one way. Wow! that would be ha,ha a real wow!
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I think a hundred bucks is as high as FS will ever go, my wishful friend. LOL
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Well then, I wish things and prizes will change in the coming few years.
Comment from The Death
I love the theme of this one. Excellent use of L alliteration along with the use of T consonance throughout.
The rhyming makes it even more interesting.
The mysteries around us will unveil only when we make an attempt to explore them. One needs to always try, and this is what makes the life beautiful.
Striking presentation of your work as well.
Very well written. :-)
Regards,
Anupam
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I love the theme of this one. Excellent use of L alliteration along with the use of T consonance throughout.
The rhyming makes it even more interesting.
The mysteries around us will unveil only when we make an attempt to explore them. One needs to always try, and this is what makes the life beautiful.
Striking presentation of your work as well.
Very well written. :-)
Regards,
Anupam
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Anupam, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from persevere
There is an ethereal feel to this ABC, endorsed by the magical artwork. Sawyer certainly has the perfect guide to the universe!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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There is an ethereal feel to this ABC, endorsed by the magical artwork. Sawyer certainly has the perfect guide to the universe!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Persevere, for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
a lovely poem..!!!
the poem is very well written with superb rhyming words.
the illustration is perfect. the vocabulary is awesome.
the theme is beautiful.
best wishes
Visheshta
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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a lovely poem..!!!
the poem is very well written with superb rhyming words.
the illustration is perfect. the vocabulary is awesome.
the theme is beautiful.
best wishes
Visheshta
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Visheshta, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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welcome :)
Comment from Debra White
Hi Brooke :) This is a beautiful little poem. I love that you incorporated rhyme into the ABC form, it gives your poem a magical feel. Nice alliteration in Luna luminates. My Grandad always used to refer to butterflies as flutterbys - your 2nd line reminded me of that! I also love your presentation...
Good luck in the contest. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke :) This is a beautiful little poem. I love that you incorporated rhyme into the ABC form, it gives your poem a magical feel. Nice alliteration in Luna luminates. My Grandad always used to refer to butterflies as flutterbys - your 2nd line reminded me of that! I also love your presentation...
Good luck in the contest. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Debra, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
