No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A delightful ABC poetry contest entry.
I like the beautiful imagery and how you have related it
back to things so special to Sawyer.
'Tis true that there is such beauty all around us but we are often to blind to see.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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A delightful ABC poetry contest entry.
I like the beautiful imagery and how you have related it
back to things so special to Sawyer.
'Tis true that there is such beauty all around us but we are often to blind to see.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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seken, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from emjaihammond
This is a beautiful combination of poetry and art. Sawyer has great taste as the moon and butterflies are among some of my favorite parts of nature too. As always beautifully done.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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This is a beautiful combination of poetry and art. Sawyer has great taste as the moon and butterflies are among some of my favorite parts of nature too. As always beautifully done.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Dinah - to balance things out he loves vacuum cleaners, ceiling fans, elevators and buses. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Enrique28
The wonder of creation seems to come across this fine poetic gem. I love the image of "Mariposa flutters by", and its awesome presentation. Excellent! Enrique
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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The wonder of creation seems to come across this fine poetic gem. I love the image of "Mariposa flutters by", and its awesome presentation. Excellent! Enrique
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Enrique, thank you so much for your generosity and encouragement :-) B rooke
Comment from nancyjam
I love the thoughts expressed in your
sweet ABC poem about the mysteries
that surround us and so many would be missed
if we don't "lift our eyes" This could also relate to
lifting our eyes and hearts to God. if we don't we miss so much.
Nice alliteration and assonance in your first line
with "luna/luminates."
I enjoyed the rhyming lines and the beautiful artwork. Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I love the thoughts expressed in your
sweet ABC poem about the mysteries
that surround us and so many would be missed
if we don't "lift our eyes" This could also relate to
lifting our eyes and hearts to God. if we don't we miss so much.
Nice alliteration and assonance in your first line
with "luna/luminates."
I enjoyed the rhyming lines and the beautiful artwork. Nancy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Nancy :-) Brooke
Comment from maggieadams
Nice ABC poem using poetic devices of alliteration and rhyme. overhead, a mystery and young and old, behold the vastness of space and the constant of the moon and sun.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Nice ABC poem using poetic devices of alliteration and rhyme. overhead, a mystery and young and old, behold the vastness of space and the constant of the moon and sun.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Maggie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Petriesan
that picture really is fascinating
is illuminates better than laminates?
really cool words./
good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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that picture really is fascinating
is illuminates better than laminates?
really cool words./
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Petriesan. I checked to make sure luminate is a variant spelling - illuminates would not fit the syllable count of the Whitney form. :-) Brooke
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got it. Knew it had to be somehting like that. . . .sorry, I should have counted better
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LOL - if that is all you need to be forgiven for, you're living a pretty good life :-)
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no comment
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Comment from alexgeorge
How beautiful. Brooke, I love the picture to this one as well. To me, this looks like a child in space, looking at earth with moon's reflection in its seas. Good luck with the ABC.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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How beautiful. Brooke, I love the picture to this one as well. To me, this looks like a child in space, looking at earth with moon's reflection in its seas. Good luck with the ABC.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Alex, for your encouraging and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Lovewritingstuff
Hi Brooke. I enjoy your entry as usual.
Love the first line particularly. There is a sense of wonder and mystery in this little poem. You obviously follow the rules of the contest and I liked the subject explored.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke. I enjoy your entry as usual.
Love the first line particularly. There is a sense of wonder and mystery in this little poem. You obviously follow the rules of the contest and I liked the subject explored.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Lovewritingstuff, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. Yes the stars have always been of the two great mysteries for man. The ocean being the other, but the sea has limits, while the stars are without numbers. Thoughtful writing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Very nice. Yes the stars have always been of the two great mysteries for man. The ocean being the other, but the sea has limits, while the stars are without numbers. Thoughtful writing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from L.M.Mullins
Lovely poem. The picture fits very well. I like the choice of words, the rhymes and the flow of them, they leave you with a feeling of endless possibilities. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Lovely poem. The picture fits very well. I like the choice of words, the rhymes and the flow of them, they leave you with a feeling of endless possibilities. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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L.M.Mullins, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
