No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from ccto12
Very pretty imagery in your poem. On a few rare occasions I've had the great joy to see a Luna Moth on the screen door at my lake house and that sighting has never failed to amaze me. Your poem is a wonderful reminder of that memory. What you write is so true - miracles and amazing sights are all around us if only we slow down and really look. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Very pretty imagery in your poem. On a few rare occasions I've had the great joy to see a Luna Moth on the screen door at my lake house and that sighting has never failed to amaze me. Your poem is a wonderful reminder of that memory. What you write is so true - miracles and amazing sights are all around us if only we slow down and really look. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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ccto12, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from visionary1234
you ALWAYS manage to pair pic and poem so beautifully Brooke! and always give us just a little philosophical 'dig' at the end - only you could make an ABC poem interesting! :)Sharyn
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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you ALWAYS manage to pair pic and poem so beautifully Brooke! and always give us just a little philosophical 'dig' at the end - only you could make an ABC poem interesting! :)Sharyn
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Sharyn, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
One big candy store full of surprises. Never knowing what it all will bring. Amazing through the eyes of a child. Well done Poet. Blessings to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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One big candy store full of surprises. Never knowing what it all will bring. Amazing through the eyes of a child. Well done Poet. Blessings to you in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Ben, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from minopavlic
Truly Brooke, I'm always left in a sense of awed appreciation,
by the limitless boundaries within the creativeness of your mind. The revelations of how God the creator reveals himself to you is in itself an extraordinary glimpse of God from a different perspective.
Blessings
Mino
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Truly Brooke, I'm always left in a sense of awed appreciation,
by the limitless boundaries within the creativeness of your mind. The revelations of how God the creator reveals himself to you is in itself an extraordinary glimpse of God from a different perspective.
Blessings
Mino
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
Comment from Gungalo
Luna (il)luminates the sky,
Mariposa flutters by.
No one knows what there might be,
overhead, a mystery --
till they lift their eyes to see.
A very bold and wonderful write in this format for Sawyer. What a cool kid he is gonna grow up to be. Awesome Brooke.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Luna (il)luminates the sky,
Mariposa flutters by.
No one knows what there might be,
overhead, a mystery --
till they lift their eyes to see.
A very bold and wonderful write in this format for Sawyer. What a cool kid he is gonna grow up to be. Awesome Brooke.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thanks so very much, Gungalo :-) Brooke
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Smile Brooke.
Comment from michaelcahill
You prove with every piece that there is no reason to ever stop seeing through the eyes of a child. I can't imagine why anyone would stop. So lovely. I hope everyone gets that "This means YOU reader!" Wonderful piece. No sixes, well you know the story... mikey
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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You prove with every piece that there is no reason to ever stop seeing through the eyes of a child. I can't imagine why anyone would stop. So lovely. I hope everyone gets that "This means YOU reader!" Wonderful piece. No sixes, well you know the story... mikey
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Mikey, thank you, my wonderfully encouraging friend :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
OH Brooke, I can just see Sawyer sitting there staring at the moon...thinking everything a smart little guy could think of...and smiling...hummmm...I so love this...well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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OH Brooke, I can just see Sawyer sitting there staring at the moon...thinking everything a smart little guy could think of...and smiling...hummmm...I so love this...well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Linda :-) When I was visiting, we went out to one of those chain restaurants that had a skylight in the ceiling. Sawyer got all animated and starting shouting, Moon, Moon because he could see the moon through the roof :-) You would think he had discovered gold :-) Brooke
Comment from Lady Ophelia
This is, once again, a very nice poem. I'd love it just for the fact that you managed to get the word mariposa in there! I just love that word! I also like the contemplative feel the poem has. What can we do but imagine until we see? And will the reality be sweeter than the dream? The temptation to look is just too strong, but often we are rewarded. I really like the picture as well, it gives off that same contemplative feeling. Good work! :)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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This is, once again, a very nice poem. I'd love it just for the fact that you managed to get the word mariposa in there! I just love that word! I also like the contemplative feel the poem has. What can we do but imagine until we see? And will the reality be sweeter than the dream? The temptation to look is just too strong, but often we are rewarded. I really like the picture as well, it gives off that same contemplative feeling. Good work! :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Lady Ophelia, thank you so much for your very thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A lovely ABC poem and well composed. Mariposa I know means butterfly and also a plant, but as it is fluttering I assume it is a butterfly in this case. A lovely read. Regards Dorothy Oh just spied your author notes - yours is a butterfly
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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A lovely ABC poem and well composed. Mariposa I know means butterfly and also a plant, but as it is fluttering I assume it is a butterfly in this case. A lovely read. Regards Dorothy Oh just spied your author notes - yours is a butterfly
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Dorothy - I also think its being in the sky makes butterfly the more logical choice :-) Brooke
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A most beautiful ABC poem and I am sure it will be greatly enjoyed bt many, including Sawyer. Lovely, dreamy presentation. Good luck in the contest. Have a beautiful day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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A most beautiful ABC poem and I am sure it will be greatly enjoyed bt many, including Sawyer. Lovely, dreamy presentation. Good luck in the contest. Have a beautiful day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Debbie, thanks so much. I am enjoying today since Monday snow is predicted. LOL :-) Brooke
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Monday will be a good day to stay home and write! Are you able to stay caught up? Between all of the site maintenance and our rather unpredictable local internet, I am hopelessly behind. I am considering just drawing the line today and moving forward~Debbie
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the only reason I'm close to caught up is because I only posted a poem every few days last week and I think I received fewer reviews than normal because so many others were locked out too - the glitches have gotten everyone down
Brooke
