No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem Brooke, with a good picture too. Good word flow with good rhyming to tell of the moon mystery. Another good one, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Good poem Brooke, with a good picture too. Good word flow with good rhyming to tell of the moon mystery. Another good one, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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GWinterwin, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke - since I am such a moon lover with the stars I really connected with this one. Lovely imagery, and a sense of awe which I liked.
Well penned as always and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Maureen
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Dear Brooke - since I am such a moon lover with the stars I really connected with this one. Lovely imagery, and a sense of awe which I liked.
Well penned as always and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Maureen :-) Brooke
Comment from manicblue
This is so refreshing - to simply stop and look at all that we miss. It reminds me of a commercial once where a boy and his father (family went camping) were lying on the hood of the car star-gazing. The little boy asked his dad "why don't we have these at home?"
I wish you well in this contest.
Lucretia xx
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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This is so refreshing - to simply stop and look at all that we miss. It reminds me of a commercial once where a boy and his father (family went camping) were lying on the hood of the car star-gazing. The little boy asked his dad "why don't we have these at home?"
I wish you well in this contest.
Lucretia xx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Lucretia, thank you for sharing that, and thank you for your review :-) Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Brooke I like the picture and you poem about the mystery of the moon until a child looks up to see the wonders of the moon and why it is so beautiful when it's full.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke I like the picture and you poem about the mystery of the moon until a child looks up to see the wonders of the moon and why it is so beautiful when it's full.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Gert, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Oatmeal
adewpearl,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The artwork complemented your poem. The flow was very nice. The theme was good.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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adewpearl,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The artwork complemented your poem. The flow was very nice. The theme was good.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Oatmeal, for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Deniz22
Thank you for your notes because I sure didn't know what a Mariposa was...perhaps a cousin to lollapalooza? :) Sawyer continues to be your muse even when unnamed...and it's ok!
I like this; short and sweet, yet expansive in vista.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your notes because I sure didn't know what a Mariposa was...perhaps a cousin to lollapalooza? :) Sawyer continues to be your muse even when unnamed...and it's ok!
I like this; short and sweet, yet expansive in vista.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Dennis, for the laugh and the review :-) brooke
Comment from madhatter1977
Hi Brooke, there is a lovely childlike wonder in the picture and poem here. The alternating names for things (moon and butterfly) strike a chord and connecting moon and butterfly seems really nice to me! Why not, hey? Best wishes, great poem again, Pete :)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke, there is a lovely childlike wonder in the picture and poem here. The alternating names for things (moon and butterfly) strike a chord and connecting moon and butterfly seems really nice to me! Why not, hey? Best wishes, great poem again, Pete :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment from Pili Pubul
What poetic images you created in this wonderful ABC poem.
It makes the reader wonder and look to the sky.
Perfect style. A gem. Good luck in the contest. Pili
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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What poetic images you created in this wonderful ABC poem.
It makes the reader wonder and look to the sky.
Perfect style. A gem. Good luck in the contest. Pili
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome. Pili
Comment from closetpoetjester
What a beautiful poem for the little man Brooke and the lunar orb has such a gravitational pull that we can help but be drawn to it...particularly children.
I love the thought of the littlies looking up in amazement and wonder and my young fella always watches for the first star of the evening. There is something very illuminating about it and I often find when I look up on a starry night at the lunar orbicular I feel like a tiny insignificant spec, but one that's damn grateful to be here in the grand scheme of things. To be on this earth and witness all we do, both good and bad is really quite a miracle. I only wish more people would look at it's wonder and appreciate it, like children and poets. Perfectly written as always and I'm sure Sawyer will love it.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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What a beautiful poem for the little man Brooke and the lunar orb has such a gravitational pull that we can help but be drawn to it...particularly children.
I love the thought of the littlies looking up in amazement and wonder and my young fella always watches for the first star of the evening. There is something very illuminating about it and I often find when I look up on a starry night at the lunar orbicular I feel like a tiny insignificant spec, but one that's damn grateful to be here in the grand scheme of things. To be on this earth and witness all we do, both good and bad is really quite a miracle. I only wish more people would look at it's wonder and appreciate it, like children and poets. Perfectly written as always and I'm sure Sawyer will love it.
Cheers P
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Phillippa, thank you so very much :-) I am pretty darned sure I would love your kids :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
I like this one very much. It is very sweet and the use of luna and mariposa is excellent. Sawyer must be very smart to understand the different words that have the same meaning. I am finally back but need to take it slow. I am doing well but am just tired of being on the mend.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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I like this one very much. It is very sweet and the use of luna and mariposa is excellent. Sawyer must be very smart to understand the different words that have the same meaning. I am finally back but need to take it slow. I am doing well but am just tired of being on the mend.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Valerie, sending you smiles :-) He is now over a thousand English words - time to move on to Spanish. LOL Yesterday while Miranda was talking to me on the phone, he deliberately dumped his little cup of grapes. He is hell on wheels when it comes to doing that kind of thing. We could both hear him declare - made a mess of the grapes. Oops. LOL Brooke
