Twenty Six Letters
A Whimsical Whitney151 total reviews
Comment from Pili Pubul
Great picture of Sawyer, love the new design, inspiration for your
perfect poem to go with all the letters. I think can make a great
song for children. Great rhytmn ... Pili
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Great picture of Sawyer, love the new design, inspiration for your
perfect poem to go with all the letters. I think can make a great
song for children. Great rhytmn ... Pili
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Pili, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome. Pili
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
great poem..!!!
very nice selection of words. the rhyming words add glory to the poem. the picture and the words are really cute.
best wishes
Visheshta
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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great poem..!!!
very nice selection of words. the rhyming words add glory to the poem. the picture and the words are really cute.
best wishes
Visheshta
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Visheshta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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welcome :)
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welcome :)
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, what a wonderful whitney. You are so clever.
I don't know how you always think of so many
different poems. Of course, I know Sawyer helps with
inspiration.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Brooke, what a wonderful whitney. You are so clever.
I don't know how you always think of so many
different poems. Of course, I know Sawyer helps with
inspiration.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
The art work is very special here
Sawyer seems to be having a great time.
The words written are very special.
Their are so many words that can be written
With twenty six letters.
honey tree
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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The art work is very special here
Sawyer seems to be having a great time.
The words written are very special.
Their are so many words that can be written
With twenty six letters.
honey tree
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Annie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Enjoyable read Brooke. Nice how you go from me to you to us in the first stanza. The picture you joined fits the poem very well.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Enjoyable read Brooke. Nice how you go from me to you to us in the first stanza. The picture you joined fits the poem very well.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Sarah, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
Great idea to have all the letters in Sawyer's playroom to familiarise him with them, Brooke.
Also, I like the fun feel of your words that would make Learning for him a pleasure rather than a chore.
Now, what's the first letter again? Oh yes ...'z'. Darnit, I have my reminder alphabet back to front again. ;-)
Have a great weekend, Ted.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Great idea to have all the letters in Sawyer's playroom to familiarise him with them, Brooke.
Also, I like the fun feel of your words that would make Learning for him a pleasure rather than a chore.
Now, what's the first letter again? Oh yes ...'z'. Darnit, I have my reminder alphabet back to front again. ;-)
Have a great weekend, Ted.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Ted, thank you :-) A happy weekend to you, too. You should get yourself a set of foam letters. Sawyer tells me they're hours of fun :-) Brooke
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the Whimsical Whitney poem as the syllable count is count and this piece has the correct number of lines. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with hard/herd. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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This piece meets the criteria of the Whimsical Whitney poem as the syllable count is count and this piece has the correct number of lines. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with hard/herd. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Righteous Riter, thanks so much for your review. Brooke
Comment from mushroom
your writing about the alphabet and letters growing to words and coupling together with the picture you have chosen ties it together, I like the humour touch too, great work as usual
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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your writing about the alphabet and letters growing to words and coupling together with the picture you have chosen ties it together, I like the humour touch too, great work as usual
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you for reviewing, mushroom - since a four means "needs improvement" and your comments are so positive, please advise on what part of the poem you want improved. Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This was a great poem I loved "hard to herd "it was great alliteration , and it was such a clever idea using the alphabet as a subject , considering how important those letters are to us all , I loved the photo , well done thank you
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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This was a great poem I loved "hard to herd "it was great alliteration , and it was such a clever idea using the alphabet as a subject , considering how important those letters are to us all , I loved the photo , well done thank you
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Andrewajgblue, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
I don't know, Brooke--everytime I try to write rhyming
poetry I wish there were a few more vowels. Same goes
for doing crossword puzzles. dqrlkzx spells something, right?
Love the line about too many letters being
hard to herd. I'm not sure it's really a pun, but I herd it that way.
It is hard to believe that all the idea and thoughts in the world can be arranged in 26 letters--even numbers.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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I don't know, Brooke--everytime I try to write rhyming
poetry I wish there were a few more vowels. Same goes
for doing crossword puzzles. dqrlkzx spells something, right?
Love the line about too many letters being
hard to herd. I'm not sure it's really a pun, but I herd it that way.
It is hard to believe that all the idea and thoughts in the world can be arranged in 26 letters--even numbers.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Lee, thank you :-) You might be onto something there - maybe if we added a few more letters, we'd find things like the missing cure for cancer in the new words :-) Brooke
