Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Welcome to Fanstory! This is a cute 5-7-5. Fun to read in a melodic sort of way. Good luck in the contest, and in your future writing!

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review. Im very new to ythis. Any Advice?

reply by Karen B. on 19-Mar-2014

Yes! Keep writing! :) You can learn about many of the different poetry forms by clicking on the "info" tab and scrolling down to that link. Don't be afraid to try them. Read poems posted here by others, especially some of the top-rated poets. I've learned a lot from some of them, tho I have a very long ways to go. Mostly, have fun, and write about things that matter to you. :)

Comment from Lysa Schuler

Excellent

Cute little poem. Pretty as well. It gives a quick vision of beauty in the beholders mind, and it was witty. I liked it alot. Good writ

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks for the reveiw. Im very new on here. Any Advice?

reply by Lysa Schuler on 19-Mar-2014

My advice would be to review poems. It is just as beneficial as writing them. Welcome, and God bless.

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014

Thank you are very appriciated. God Bless You Too.