Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Do Me Naked"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
5 total reviews
Comment from comanalbert
Never said who her dad is, after all. Never heard of he-fairy so an elf or a leprechaun...Perhaps, no, you must have details later...
(to the cup)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Never said who her dad is, after all. Never heard of he-fairy so an elf or a leprechaun...Perhaps, no, you must have details later...
(to the cup)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Of course there are male fairies, or where would baby fairies come from ;). Shakespeare wrote about Oberon in A Midsummer Night's Dream. I rather think that if we meet dad later, hell be an oberon-type figure, which should make for an interesting interplay with Oz. Thanks for the review.
Comment from babylonia
Bob,
This is another great chapter. LOL Oz is his usual, wonderful self. Easy to read and follow. One possible spaggie.
The woman notice (noticed) Ess and Oz for the first time
Great job!
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Bob,
This is another great chapter. LOL Oz is his usual, wonderful self. Easy to read and follow. One possible spaggie.
The woman notice (noticed) Ess and Oz for the first time
Great job!
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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It's not a possible spag, it's a definite one. Thanks for the review.
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LOL Glad I could help.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Great chapter, Snod. I love the dialog and Oz's probing, but necessary questions. I eagerly await the next chapter. Interesting how Martin will prove that he is the fairy's lover. Very provocative chapter title!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Great chapter, Snod. I love the dialog and Oz's probing, but necessary questions. I eagerly await the next chapter. Interesting how Martin will prove that he is the fairy's lover. Very provocative chapter title!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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I hope Martin can too, otherwise it might be a very short book
Comment from Adri7enne
"I didn't realise that FAIRY'S um..." FAIRIES plain plural, isn't it?
"Out of the cornere of her eye Ess saw Oz raise his hand and she mentally kissed the case godbye." LOL! I started laughing here!
"The woman NOTICE Ess and Oz for the first time, assessed..." NOTICED
Sigh! Loving it, snod. So good to settle into a good witchy novel with you. Which is not to say you shouldn't finish the steampunk. But do this one first. Good fun, snod.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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"I didn't realise that FAIRY'S um..." FAIRIES plain plural, isn't it?
"Out of the cornere of her eye Ess saw Oz raise his hand and she mentally kissed the case godbye." LOL! I started laughing here!
"The woman NOTICE Ess and Oz for the first time, assessed..." NOTICED
Sigh! Loving it, snod. So good to settle into a good witchy novel with you. Which is not to say you shouldn't finish the steampunk. But do this one first. Good fun, snod.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Doh. That's what comes of writing in the pub. Thanks for that. The steampunk has run out of steam. I have a plot block on how to get from here to there. Glad you're liking this one
Comment from DonandVicki
I loved this continuation to your fantasy fiction novel. Good character development and your words held on to my attention. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I loved this continuation to your fantasy fiction novel. Good character development and your words held on to my attention. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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You're very kind, thank you
