Clickety Clack (acrostic)
an acrostic poem171 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic poem about the way we need to focus on the bigger picture to make it through problems. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic poem about the way we need to focus on the bigger picture to make it through problems. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cragler
A well worked acrostic here your rhyme and cadence are perfect as always. You portray your subject well I read it as moving on from the past. Very nice cheers Craig
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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A well worked acrostic here your rhyme and cadence are perfect as always. You portray your subject well I read it as moving on from the past. Very nice cheers Craig
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Craig, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
When I was small, my dad was a train driver, and I fell in love with trains. They still hold a fascination for me. I am sure the Cute Little One had a great time. This is well written. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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When I was small, my dad was a train driver, and I fell in love with trains. They still hold a fascination for me. I am sure the Cute Little One had a great time. This is well written. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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CR, thanks so much :-) What a great job! Brooke
Comment from seaglass
This smooth, rhyming poem gives good advice. Dwelling of negative past experience takes up good brain space and crowds out positive energy.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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This smooth, rhyming poem gives good advice. Dwelling of negative past experience takes up good brain space and crowds out positive energy.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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seaglass, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from califdot
Nicely written. The picture you chose works well with your poem. Your poem flows nicely. It has a good sounding cadence when read out loud. Congratulations on your recognition award. Good job!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Nicely written. The picture you chose works well with your poem. Your poem flows nicely. It has a good sounding cadence when read out loud. Congratulations on your recognition award. Good job!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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califdot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Welcome!
Comment from TELLER OF TALES
fascinating work it is absolutely wonderful, very well composed and driven, the words of the author seem to flow, it is such an amusing piece that it leaves a smile in the readers face, once again wonderful, I loved reading it very much and I enjoyed it entirely....The Teller of tales....
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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fascinating work it is absolutely wonderful, very well composed and driven, the words of the author seem to flow, it is such an amusing piece that it leaves a smile in the readers face, once again wonderful, I loved reading it very much and I enjoyed it entirely....The Teller of tales....
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Teller of Tales, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
I love acrostic poetry that doesn't read or sound forced to keep in line with the letters. Your acrostic is wonderful, Brooke, as it flows so smoothly with great enjambment. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I love acrostic poetry that doesn't read or sound forced to keep in line with the letters. Your acrostic is wonderful, Brooke, as it flows so smoothly with great enjambment. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much - that was hard to achieve in this poem with C and K words required LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from ILovePoetry!
Absolutely incredible! I love how you turned life into an acrostic poem train journey. Although I've heard life compared to a journey (well, it is one), the acrostic twist was brilliant! You said everything that needed to be said with nothing extra. It fits perfectly! Great job!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Absolutely incredible! I love how you turned life into an acrostic poem train journey. Although I've heard life compared to a journey (well, it is one), the acrostic twist was brilliant! You said everything that needed to be said with nothing extra. It fits perfectly! Great job!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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ILovePoetry, thank you so very much for your generous six stars and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
There are a lot of reviewers that should read this. Some poems read like a pity party. Good advice to leave the past behind and look to the future.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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There are a lot of reviewers that should read this. Some poems read like a pity party. Good advice to leave the past behind and look to the future.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, spitfire. Yes, sometimes the whining reaches fevered pitch. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from manicblue
Simple words pointing out a serious truth about life. It's hard to move on I've found, but the alternative is just too sad to waste much time on it. Thank you for pointing out the key to finding the good in life.
Lucretia
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Simple words pointing out a serious truth about life. It's hard to move on I've found, but the alternative is just too sad to waste much time on it. Thank you for pointing out the key to finding the good in life.
Lucretia
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Lucretia, thank you so much :-) Brooke
