Clickety Clack (acrostic)
an acrostic poem171 total reviews
Comment from krys123
An excellent piece of an acrostic poem which is very inventive, illuminative and ingenious Because you added an excellent rhyming pattern to it which neither rhymes were forced, labored or strained and that rhyming made the rhythm flow smoothly throughout the poem. Thanks for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may you always find peace forever in wherever you are.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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An excellent piece of an acrostic poem which is very inventive, illuminative and ingenious Because you added an excellent rhyming pattern to it which neither rhymes were forced, labored or strained and that rhyming made the rhythm flow smoothly throughout the poem. Thanks for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may you always find peace forever in wherever you are.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Alex, thank you so much for your most thoughtful comments and generous rating :-) Brooke
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You are so sincerely welcome Brooke,
Alex
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Solid message Brooke. We cannot keep dwelling on the past, this will only bring us down. We need to look ahead into the future indeed! Nice acrostic.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Solid message Brooke. We cannot keep dwelling on the past, this will only bring us down. We need to look ahead into the future indeed! Nice acrostic.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Sarah, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jmdg1954
That is totally true. Life has no reverse. Do well and move on. Do wrong, fix it. You cannot dwell on the past because it will not change. What were the songs words,"clickety clack, don't come back"!
Great last lines, "keep your sights on what's ahead and blow out of town".
Good luck in the voting. John
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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That is totally true. Life has no reverse. Do well and move on. Do wrong, fix it. You cannot dwell on the past because it will not change. What were the songs words,"clickety clack, don't come back"!
Great last lines, "keep your sights on what's ahead and blow out of town".
Good luck in the voting. John
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, John :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
Acrostic and onomatopoeia make perfect bedfellows, so your title really worked for me, and you put it to solid use. Great fun, well realised, and a flow that mimics the running train metaphor. Brilliant!
Mike
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Acrostic and onomatopoeia make perfect bedfellows, so your title really worked for me, and you put it to solid use. Great fun, well realised, and a flow that mimics the running train metaphor. Brilliant!
Mike
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Mike, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from TOMORAL
Lovely and delightful with a strong message to those who hold on the past. I am guilty of such sometimes, but not as often as I used to. Great writing and a joy to read.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Lovely and delightful with a strong message to those who hold on the past. I am guilty of such sometimes, but not as often as I used to. Great writing and a joy to read.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Tomoral, thank you. It is a very difficult habit to break 100% of the time :-) Brooke
Comment from AprilShower
Crying might release the tension, Brooke. The rest is very good advice. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is well written. I have no suggestions.
April
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Crying might release the tension, Brooke. The rest is very good advice. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is well written. I have no suggestions.
April
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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April, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RodG
i am never quite sure how to review an acrostic poem, but I really like this one, Brooke, because of the clever rhyming. Your sage advice to quit crying and get on with life is very well expressed for ALL readers.
Rod
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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i am never quite sure how to review an acrostic poem, but I really like this one, Brooke, because of the clever rhyming. Your sage advice to quit crying and get on with life is very well expressed for ALL readers.
Rod
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from JM daSilva
Crazy is doing the same thing over and over again, expecting different results. Sometimes people who dwell in the past do that.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Crazy is doing the same thing over and over again, expecting different results. Sometimes people who dwell in the past do that.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, JM :-) Brooke
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Great pleasure.
Comment from ennahanid
What an excellent acrostic for the contest - I wish you luck in the contest with this one. Great idea I think of using a 'sound' so's to speak for your words. Great picture, absolutely love the black and white presentation - Dinah
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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What an excellent acrostic for the contest - I wish you luck in the contest with this one. Great idea I think of using a 'sound' so's to speak for your words. Great picture, absolutely love the black and white presentation - Dinah
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Dinah, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
Clickety Clack all the way out of town. Great advice to those who get stuck at the train station feeling sorry about their life. "Evict each trial and trouble" is my favorite line. Just get on out of here. Focus on the road and ahead and Clickey Clack on out of town. 8-)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Clickety Clack all the way out of town. Great advice to those who get stuck at the train station feeling sorry about their life. "Evict each trial and trouble" is my favorite line. Just get on out of here. Focus on the road and ahead and Clickey Clack on out of town. 8-)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, boxergirl :-) Brooke
