Clickety Clack (acrostic)
an acrostic poem171 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A clever and well written acrostic Brooke filled with wisdom. Crying does not get us anywhere though I often wish life had a reverse. At our house we have mulligans or do overs.
Great poem, good use of alliteration, perfect rhyme. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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A clever and well written acrostic Brooke filled with wisdom. Crying does not get us anywhere though I often wish life had a reverse. At our house we have mulligans or do overs.
Great poem, good use of alliteration, perfect rhyme. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Janet, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Nice use of clickety-clack to create your acrostic, very appropriate given the subject. As you say life has no reverse.
Patrick
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Nice use of clickety-clack to create your acrostic, very appropriate given the subject. As you say life has no reverse.
Patrick
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Patrick, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Petriesan
Keep your sights on what's ahead
and blow on out of town!
Too often, this seems the only option. Sometimes it is right, sometimes it is not.
Good poem. The acrostic is wonderful
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Keep your sights on what's ahead
and blow on out of town!
Too often, this seems the only option. Sometimes it is right, sometimes it is not.
Good poem. The acrostic is wonderful
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Petriesan :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hello, That is one fine poem. It has some good truth in it..I love the last line, just go on, get out and do it with style.
Life can be an Edsel or a great train ride...I'll take the train, thanks.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Hello, That is one fine poem. It has some good truth in it..I love the last line, just go on, get out and do it with style.
Life can be an Edsel or a great train ride...I'll take the train, thanks.
padumachitta
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Life has no reverse. << And wishing it did is pointless
You need to leave life's rubble. << Superb line!
WOW! You've said it all here, Brooke. Clever and to the point. :)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Life has no reverse. << And wishing it did is pointless
You need to leave life's rubble. << Superb line!
WOW! You've said it all here, Brooke. Clever and to the point. :)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Phyllis :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
Boy Brooke, that is great advice that I need right now. This is a great acrostic poem and I wish you well in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Boy Brooke, that is great advice that I need right now. This is a great acrostic poem and I wish you well in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is just a fun poem that leaves us to really want to try and get over the past. What's done is done. However you can learn from the past. Very good poem.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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This is just a fun poem that leaves us to really want to try and get over the past. What's done is done. However you can learn from the past. Very good poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Bobby Jo, thank you so much :-) I truly appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Janie King
The trains should have definitely intrigued our little fellow for sure. This is an awesome poem with a very important message. Great piece. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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The trains should have definitely intrigued our little fellow for sure. This is an awesome poem with a very important message. Great piece. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Janie, thank you so much. Travel Town is part of Griffith Park in L.A., so Sawyer has visited several times. What's not to love about a bunch of trains? LOL I appreciate your generous sixth star. Brooke
Comment from Gungalo
Cursing all that's happened
Leaves you beaten down.
Ask yourself if staying on
Can turn your life around.
Keep your sights on what's ahead
and blow on out of town!
A grey day eh? Wonderful Acrostic and it's rhymed too. Amazing Btooke. I love your choice of words.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Cursing all that's happened
Leaves you beaten down.
Ask yourself if staying on
Can turn your life around.
Keep your sights on what's ahead
and blow on out of town!
A grey day eh? Wonderful Acrostic and it's rhymed too. Amazing Btooke. I love your choice of words.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Gungalo, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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Smile Brooke.
Comment from darla1977
This feels like a message for me! I have been the rider in this piece for many yrs. Only very recently have I started to overcome my past pains and disappointments, and really live again. I still have those days though! This piece spoke to me, and I love what it said! Very encouraging, and I love the clickety clackety way it sounds when read out loud! Excellent!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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This feels like a message for me! I have been the rider in this piece for many yrs. Only very recently have I started to overcome my past pains and disappointments, and really live again. I still have those days though! This piece spoke to me, and I love what it said! Very encouraging, and I love the clickety clackety way it sounds when read out loud! Excellent!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Darla, thank you so much :-) Brooke
