Comment from babylonia

Exceptional

Bob,
Okay, you have my attention now. Who doesn't love a good Ess & Oz mystery. I can't wait to see what you have in store for me. They are two of my faves. Hope you're having a really great day.
Love,
Barbara

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

Thanks. I must admit I have a soft spot for them too.

reply by babylonia on 27-Mar-2014

:D

Comment from Adri7enne

Exceptional

Oz and Ess are my favorite characters, too. So glad to see them again.

LOL! So they're off, looking for a fairy. A Daisy fairy. Well, of course. I loved it. Yea!!!


'Bout damn near time you got back to writing. You might feed that dog other things besides your homework, snod! Welcome back, my friend.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Thanks. Glad you liked it. I have a soft spot for them too

Comment from comanalbert

Excellent

Is the dog alright and still in this world?
Great chapter, bold to attack the elemental world, with a mystery type...
PS: is Chauff still alive?

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Chaf, I'm afraid, is somewhat comatose. I have a block as to how to get from here to there, so I'm letting it sleep for a while. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A nicely constructed chapter to your novel. Good visuals created with your words and my attention was held throughout the write. Don

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Thanks. Glad you liked it

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Whoa! A fairy. Now you're treading in my territory. Seriously, I love how this story begins. The little Barista prick is perfect. I love Oz and Ess. Seems they have little to go on thus far. But, I'm sure they will uncover clues. Looking forward to the next chapter.

"Despite his youth he had the supercilious look off pat." Perhaps a typo here? What does "look off pat" mean?

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014

It's a UK expression. To have something off pat means you have perfected the skill. http://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/off-pat So there!
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. Not a lot to go on yet, but if it was all dumped in their lap on page one, where would the story go?

reply by Green Lake Girl on 10-Mar-2014

Thanks for the explanation. I found it hard to imagine that you would have a typo, but then, editing is a funny thing. It's obvious Oz and Ess have their work cut out for them. Curious; just how tall is your fairy character?

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014

Her legs go all the way down to the ground

reply by Green Lake Girl on 11-Mar-2014

I see you're still funny! My favorite trait in a human. I also appreciate a funny fairy.

There's a fairy coming up in my Spud Sullivan story . . .