haiku (fabric of winter)
crystal brook edgings8 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the picture you took. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written Haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the picture you took. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Hi Teri, I had to go back and read my own poem.LOL I found that I wrote "Fabric of Winter" six years ago! I'm glad you discovered it and enjoyed the imagery. it means a lot! Thank you for the wonderful review! :o) Nancy
Comment from pattipac
Your lovely photo and descriptive words in poem describe the beauty found in harsh winter. Like how you creatively describe the crystals as lace on the fabric of winter.
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Your lovely photo and descriptive words in poem describe the beauty found in harsh winter. Like how you creatively describe the crystals as lace on the fabric of winter.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
Comment from zanya
An interesting metaphorical angle here in this Haiku on an aspect of winter's icy grip 'delicate crystals' which 'appear as lace on brooks edge'.
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An interesting metaphorical angle here in this Haiku on an aspect of winter's icy grip 'delicate crystals' which 'appear as lace on brooks edge'.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
Comment from Marillion
Well, I for one am ready for that fabric to come apart, my friend, but at least the freeze of winter has given you something to write about, and with a beautiful image, too. Good luck in the contest.
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Well, I for one am ready for that fabric to come apart, my friend, but at least the freeze of winter has given you something to write about, and with a beautiful image, too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
Comment from Pili Pubul
I truly enjoy very much both... A wonderful presentation.
Love the images you painted so delicate in this haiku
Inspired by your picture. Lovely. Pili
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I truly enjoy very much both... A wonderful presentation.
Love the images you painted so delicate in this haiku
Inspired by your picture. Lovely. Pili
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
Comment from J. P. Egry
Love the poem, love the picture. The metaphor of fabric and lace works so well in describing much of the winter around us now. Thanks for sharing this pleasant moment!
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Love the poem, love the picture. The metaphor of fabric and lace works so well in describing much of the winter around us now. Thanks for sharing this pleasant moment!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
Comment from yarnteller
Crystal clear wordage on this beautiful poem of winter gives the reader a vivid image of nature's own lace. Nicely done.
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Crystal clear wordage on this beautiful poem of winter gives the reader a vivid image of nature's own lace. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
Comment from manicblue
This had a beautiful soothing tone to it. The picture fits quite well too. I'm horrible at haiku but I don't see anything wrong with this: it's lower case, no punctuation, has a seasonal reference, no alliteration or personification. Nicely done.
mb xoxo
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This had a beautiful soothing tone to it. The picture fits quite well too. I'm horrible at haiku but I don't see anything wrong with this: it's lower case, no punctuation, has a seasonal reference, no alliteration or personification. Nicely done.
mb xoxo
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
