Comment from smudge

Exceptional

A very beautiful poem of lullaby proportions. I really enjoyed reading it. It rhymes well and has an excellent rhythm and flow. A well presented post.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and for the six stars. I truly appreciate them and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

I liked the musicality to the way this poem reads. It is just written in a way that makes it so easy to follow in its cadence. The thoughts are well written and I enjoyed partaking of this excellent piece of poetic art... John

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from patsypats

Excellent

The vivid imagery that you have displayed through your word collection is great. I was reeled in by your words and you captured my attention from beginning to end. Your picture choice accents your words well and the rhyming adds even more character to your work:)

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from rtobaygo

Exceptional

Hello:

WOW! What a delightful poem. The rhyme, flow, continuity and imagery are impressive. The picture really blew me away.

Great post!

Take care,

Ray

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and for the six stars. I truly appreciate them and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Idamarty, this write utilizes appropriate language and impressions that a child would have in this vision of dreams. Great rhyme and meter with endearing terms. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Hi GracieAnn,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from queenv

Excellent

Yes the picture is so whimsical and delightful. Yes this is the making of children poetry . Looks like a scene from a movie. The poem is well written.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Wish I had six stars left, becuz your poem definitely deserves it. This is so delightful, I'm at a loss for words. Before I forget, in stanza 4, I believe it should be "whose" not the hyphenated form. Anyhow, I am totally mind-boggled by people like you who can write with such amazing imagination! It's just such a mark of brilliance to me. I can't even quote any of my favorite lines, becuz the entire thing is perfectly crafted. I definitely enjoyed the poem more than the image. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from Gladness

Excellent

Very whimsical picture you wrote about. I like the things you added as well, the octopus and so forth. You might want to tweak the second line, "As night stars glitter and yellow moon beams." Maybe "with yellow moon beams".
Thanks again for the fanciful trip :)Anita

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

What a wonderful magical childrens' world is evoked - imagination running free and some superb imagery 'Covered in icing of aqua marine'

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Such a lovely whimsical poem inhabiting that glorious world of imagination and dreams that is the birthright of every child. Such a precious thing to hold onto as all poets know!
"``Don`t be shy,`` he says, ``come join us a while.``
You stand in awe, wanting so much to go,
Just for a moment, mom and dad won`t know."

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.