Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Haha cute!
I have a recipe for happiness.
1 x purr box
NO CLAWS
1 x soft lap
1 x pair of kind hands

It's a winner every time! Although the menu was a good idea mate! Bacon and eggs it seems is a staple diet for the felines as WELL as the humans. Well written in short.
Cheers P

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

the bacon and eggs was more symbolic, not exactly a menu LOL
Potato has claws but is wonderful at never using them, at least not on Sawyer.
thanks so much, Phillipa :-) Brooke

reply by closetpoetjester on 08-Mar-2014

Good!
He would be a very unhealthy puss! LOL

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Potato? A lap potato, maybe?

Your comfortable analogies lead to a hopeful conclusion and a clever rhyme to tie it all together. A sweet lune, Brooke. :) nancy

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Thank you so much, Nancy :-) Potato is a wonderful lap cat. Brooke

Comment from billscott

Excellent

Always fun poetry you give.

Great photo to along with it.

And of course, your creativity shines again!

Fun work!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is so cute, brooke, the pairing of things that makes a person pair for their own other half. I love the picture, Miranda has some long legs. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, sweetwoodjax :-) They're skinny legs, too. LOL I think that is what makes Potato seem so big. Brooke :-)

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Super photo. Love this stretched-out "potato" cat. He's a lunker! A very fun and well written poem. I hope you do well in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Green Lake Girl, thank you so much :-) So glad you got a kick out of Potato :-) Brooke

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Great job on your Lune and excellent contest entry. I could tell Potato is a very special member of the family. I enpued the poem. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Cajungirl, thank you so much :-) Potato is much loved. Brooke

reply by Cajungirl on 08-Mar-2014

you are welcome

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Brooke, I like it. This definitely gave me a smile.
I like the rhyme within a sentence ... cats and laps
I also like the cats name. Never heard one named Potato.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Judy, thank you so much :-) My daughter is a creative namer. Brooke

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

I like this ! its interesting, direct, and straight to the point. You create a unique vibe and situation here. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Thank you so much, James :-) Brooke

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Brooke,
Whether it's a long poem or a short one like this, a musical rhythm is always found there and I like it most.
Simple and impressive wording.
Pleasant flow with lively imagery.
Marvelous piece of poetry in the form of 'Lune' meeting all the desired parameters!
Best of Luck!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

RP, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments, good luck wishes and generous sixth star :-) Brooke

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hi, Brooke.

This is lovely and witty too.
Nice use of punctuation to present a thought in this lune.
The last is just too good.
The selfie is amusing as well.
I enjoyed reading it. :-)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Anupam, thank you so much :-) Brooke