Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a very cute lune poem Brooke for the contest. Your syllable count and line count are perfect. Good luck to you!
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Brooke,

Yes, cat's and laps are as eggs are to bacon - a given. I think I must try to get a picture of my 'snuggle of Shelties' when my two insist on sharing my lap.

There's probably a poem or two in that image.

Patrick

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Patrick - I enjoy your videos of your dogs on Facebook :-) Brooke

reply by Patrick G Cox on 07-Mar-2014

They're a lot of fun - but a big distraction when trying to write!

Patrick

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

fried eggs and bacon
cats and laps
you and me perhaps
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is spot on. Good end rhyming with laps/perhaps. Clear message that is short and simple.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Righteous Riter, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hi Brooke

What a wonderful paring of cats and laps! This is as good as eggs n bacon:)

You and me perhaps? OO EER! A man on the horizon maybe....

Lovely short and thoughtful poem.

Great write

kind regards
trimple:)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

A man on the horizon, oh that is about as likely as my becoming President any time soon. LOL :-) Thanks so much for the laugh and your great review :-) Brooke

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

fried eggs and bacon
cats and laps --
you and me, perhaps?

A great lune with a humorous note about it. LOL. Brooke this is so funny that it wll be remembered for a long long time. LOL.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Gungalo - glad you got a laugh :-) Brooke

reply by Gungalo on 07-Mar-2014

Smile Brooke.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Now that sounds like a good match. Our cat (who thinks he is a dog) is not away from human contact for more than a few minutes. Lay down and he's on your chest. Type and yep, he's on the keyboard.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

I have had far more lap cats than stereotypically aloof cats - thanks so much, ravenblack :-) Brooke

Comment from Angel Blessings

Excellent

Great contest interest! great presentation, loved the rhyming, flowed well! hope you win the contest. Sincerely Angel Blessings

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Angel Blessings, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from comanalbert

Excellent

Wonderful image of a breakfast together and a intimate, cuddling evening guarded by the cat. Strange name for a cat, though. I want to have a dog (when I grow up and have a garden), a Rottweiler, and call him Dog- I am more unusual than Potato...

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, comanalbert. I used to have a cat named Kitty. :-) Brooke

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke - nice lune poem - great pick. One of those lazy day moods which always seem to revive us. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Maureen, thank you so much :-) rooke

Comment from strandregs

Excellent

Thanks for the punctuation tip.
I say, it's worth reading your poems just for the tips.
Cats and laps and loons
Me and you definatelly.Z.
My unhappy auntie is expecting you :) Z.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Z, thank you so much :-) Brooke