Cats and Laps
a lune165 total reviews
Comment from manicblue
lol Potato looks like they've certainly had their share of bacon. That's SO cute. It's true to the lune criteria and style. I wish you well in this contest.
Lucretia xx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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lol Potato looks like they've certainly had their share of bacon. That's SO cute. It's true to the lune criteria and style. I wish you well in this contest.
Lucretia xx
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Lucretia :-) Brooke
Comment from nancyjam
Nothing like togetherness - love your pairings
and the final line as a question adds a playfulness
to your Lune poem.
Nice addition of rhyme as well.
Love the selfie of that gigantic cat!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Nothing like togetherness - love your pairings
and the final line as a question adds a playfulness
to your Lune poem.
Nice addition of rhyme as well.
Love the selfie of that gigantic cat!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
Apple pie and ice cream. Yes, some things just go together.
Assonance with eggs and bacon. Rhyme with cats and laps and perhaps. Love the question mark at the end.
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Apple pie and ice cream. Yes, some things just go together.
Assonance with eggs and bacon. Rhyme with cats and laps and perhaps. Love the question mark at the end.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Spitfire :-) Brooke
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, this Lune Poetry Contest contest entry is so humorous. It's a great example of fitting and togetherness. The syllable and line count are perfect and the Ahh moment at the end is endearing. All the best in the contest!
Acts like my cat...all about laps. LOL :0 GracieAnn
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Brooke, this Lune Poetry Contest contest entry is so humorous. It's a great example of fitting and togetherness. The syllable and line count are perfect and the Ahh moment at the end is endearing. All the best in the contest!
Acts like my cat...all about laps. LOL :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from playinaround
Sounds like a wonderful morning. Nothing like a kitty in your lap content and purring. Makes me miss the kitties in my life. This is very sweet and gives a good feeling. I like the senses, the bacon frying and the warmth and love of a cat on ones lap. It reminds me a bit of doctor Suess. This is a fun poem!
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Sounds like a wonderful morning. Nothing like a kitty in your lap content and purring. Makes me miss the kitties in my life. This is very sweet and gives a good feeling. I like the senses, the bacon frying and the warmth and love of a cat on ones lap. It reminds me a bit of doctor Suess. This is a fun poem!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, playinaround :-) I'm glad you had fun. Brooke
Comment from Craigitar
Eggs and bacon, a natural combination, cats and laps no different. You and me, inseparable too. At least that's my take on this lune. Clever comparisons, a bit of wistfulness and you managed to squeeze in a rhyme. A lot said in a small space. Good job, Brooke!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Eggs and bacon, a natural combination, cats and laps no different. You and me, inseparable too. At least that's my take on this lune. Clever comparisons, a bit of wistfulness and you managed to squeeze in a rhyme. A lot said in a small space. Good job, Brooke!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, Craig :-) Brooke
Comment from juliaSjames
Oh, what a sense of coziness invoked by this short write.
Your syllable-perfect lines are penned in perfect shorthand, Brooke.
A sizzling, tasty breakfast, and a snuggle on the couch in the evening. Fill in the blanks!
Love the endearingly, half-hopeful tone of the proposal. We're a good fit, why not give it a go?
Nice touch of rhyme to give a lyrical quality to the write.
Great picture of a snoozing cat. Reminds me of my dear, departed Chewbacca.
Best of luck in the contest. Hope you bring home the bacon. LOL
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Oh, what a sense of coziness invoked by this short write.
Your syllable-perfect lines are penned in perfect shorthand, Brooke.
A sizzling, tasty breakfast, and a snuggle on the couch in the evening. Fill in the blanks!
Love the endearingly, half-hopeful tone of the proposal. We're a good fit, why not give it a go?
Nice touch of rhyme to give a lyrical quality to the write.
Great picture of a snoozing cat. Reminds me of my dear, departed Chewbacca.
Best of luck in the contest. Hope you bring home the bacon. LOL
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Julia :-) I'm glad you felt the wistful quality
Brooke
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Comment from lakeport
Cats and laps , indeed cats love to sit on laps, I can relate to that,I have two cats,a very nice expressed lune poem, good luck at the contest,God bless you, Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Cats and laps , indeed cats love to sit on laps, I can relate to that,I have two cats,a very nice expressed lune poem, good luck at the contest,God bless you, Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from boxergirl
fried eggs and bacon
cats and laps --
you and me, perhaps?
I love the picture of the cat in the lap. Nice assonance with cats and laps. Good end rhyme with laps and perhaps. Great message of things that are great when paired together. 8-)
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fried eggs and bacon
cats and laps --
you and me, perhaps?
I love the picture of the cat in the lap. Nice assonance with cats and laps. Good end rhyme with laps and perhaps. Great message of things that are great when paired together. 8-)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. Potato, as in couch? LOL.
This is a poem every cat lover knows the tune to. How fun is that, and again bacon sandwhiches, man I miss those. My dog would love one, she was raised partly by a cat....
padumachitta
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Hello. Potato, as in couch? LOL.
This is a poem every cat lover knows the tune to. How fun is that, and again bacon sandwhiches, man I miss those. My dog would love one, she was raised partly by a cat....
padumachitta
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Padumachitta, thank you so much. You're right, Potato does not live a life of exercise and hard labor. LOL I'm so glad to see you signed up for the course :-) Brooke
