Comment from krys123

Excellent

First I would like to say that looks like a very hefty kitty and I could see that it's very comfortable's lying on someone's lap. For a lune poem this one has a good chance of winning I found it somewhat amusing and truly sincere for I think facetious reasons. Thank you for sharing am posting this for everyone And may you have a good one Brooke as always.
Alex

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by krys123 on 09-Mar-2014

You are so sincerely welcome Brooke

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Hi Brooke, ( love that name, striking, but unpretentious ) A good short lune poem, expressive and succinct. Cats have played a huge blessed role in my family's life, so I relate to this one! Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Roy. I've always liked my name too :-) Brooke

Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Great photo!
This is darling and sweet
A special kind catification?
Reads well ad make sense.
Creative and original work.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Maddy, thank you so much :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from Just Pete

Excellent

Lune poetry is a bit of an oddity but his one is most amusing. Why is it that cats always seek out the one person in the room who doesn't like cats? (I'm a dog lover). They leep onto my lap and proceed the tear meg with those shapr claws.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

LOL - Thanks for the laughs and the review, Pete. Sorry you've been abused by cats ;-) Brooke

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

I love the photo. My older cat likes to lay on the back of the couch with her head on my shoulder. Nice flow and a sense of calm and pleasantness conveyed.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

ragamuffin, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This is a delightful lune and certainly fulfills all the requirements.
I like how you have shown the relationships that we often take for granted: cats & laps, eggs and bacon, and human ones.
Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
Rod

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

So cute, Brooke. The count is right. don't know about the punctuation. I love the cat. It is so big! I'd sure have one on my lap, if I could. I am allergic. Good luck in the contest. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Miss Sally :-) Brooke

Comment from brittanydawngray

Excellent

What a great lune about Potato :) I enjoy the line "you and me, perhaps?" It's cute and shows the love a pet. Best wishes.


Brittany Dawn Gray

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

Brittany, thank you for your review :-) Brooke

reply by brittanydawngray on 09-Mar-2014

You are very welcome Brooke :)

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Potato o is such a cute and different name for a cat. I enjoyed your lune poem and hope it does well in the contest. I like the three pairs you mention in the poem. In my research of lune, the only rule the creator of this form is using a syllable count of 5-3-5, and the poet is free to use any poetic device they wish.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Karyn :-) Brooke

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is a serious lapse
And if something doesn't happen soon ......a relapse...
Diet fare from now on...or kitty's not going to make it to be able to jump on your lap. He he he
God bless

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, kiwijenny. Potato has no trouble fitting on my ample lap. My daughter's skinny legs, on the other hand, make poor Potato look huge. LOL Brooke :-)