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Cats and Laps

a lune

165 total reviews 
Comment from tbacha58
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fried eggs and bacon
cats and laps --
you and me, perhaps?

Hi Brooke, can you invite me for breakfast? What a beautiful picture that goes great with your verse. Love Terry Hi to baby Sawyer. xoxo

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
    Terry, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
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HI Brooke, Potato...makes me laugh...now that is a big cat...LOL...he looks very happy to me...LOL...so very cute..and I love your poem...a great picture...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Thanks so much, Linda - in fairness to Potato, Miranda has really skinny legs. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by l.raven on 07-Mar-2014
    you toooooo funny...LOL...
Comment from Cumbrianlass
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Right away, it brought to mind 'peas and carrots' from Forrest Gump, which is one of my favourite films. Some things just go together - there's no fighting it!

I actually think this poem would be a sweet Valentines message, Brooke!

I wish you well in the contest.

Av

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
    Av, I had forgotten that scene. :-) Thanks so much. Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
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Good poem Brooke, with a great picture to match. Such few words telling a lot about things in life that we don't often think about.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    GWinterwin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from DALLAS01
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What a strange coincidence this is. I just disturbed my Maggie who was holding me down in the same position. Now she sits on the couch looking at me awaiting my return. Nice Lune. On my way back to the couch.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Thanks so much, Dallas. Miranda told me she sat that way for an hour the day she took the picture, and it was Potato's fault. I tend to believe my overworked daughter was using Potato's well-being as a bit of an excuse. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by DALLAS01 on 08-Mar-2014
    They have a way of making you feel guilty when you move.
Comment from words
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Love the title of this one, Brooke. I have spent many the contented hour with a cat on my lap.

I love how you are the master of every form that you try.

I am so glad that you hold the number one slot.

You are a virtuoso.

Hugs, your fan, d

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Diane, you have made my night. Thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from twinklepoems
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Good pairing of eggs and bacon/cats and laps/you and me. I like the rhyming of laps and perhaps. Cute picture...cat camera shy? Nice lune!

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Twinkle, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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He looks a big fellow, I'll bet he weighs a bit! But one can tell he is used to the good life, (in more ways than one,) A lovely Lune for the competition, Brooke, Giddy

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Thanks so very much, Giddy :-) Yep, my daughter dotes on her cats, so life is cushy for Potato :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
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I think this is the first Lune I have read from and I like it too. How does these things go together in the perfect way. Just like friends. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
    Thank you so much, lancellot :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
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Truly very clever Lune, I love the associations, I like them all ,
fabulous last line , very sweet.
Good luck in the contest, love Miranda's picture of Potato LOL. Pili

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
    Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke
reply by Pili Pubul on 07-Mar-2014
    You very welcome Brooke.( ;---)